STAR HardProbes PWG

[Barbara Trzeciak <barbara.trzeciak AT gmail.com>]

Hi Diptanil, Yuan,

nice abstract. Please see below my comments.

Title: Charm Mesons and Charm Meson Tagged Jets -> Charm Mesons and Charm Meson Tagged Jets in Heavy-Ion Collisions

- L1: Heavy flavor partons like charm (c) and bottom (b) -> Heavy flavor quarks (charm  and bottom)

- L2: of the collisions -> of the heavy-ion collisions

- L2: of the Quark-Gluon Plasma -> of the Quark-Gluon Plasma (QGP)

- L7: The jet fragmentation function is related to the transverse momentum fraction .. and connects -> (I would swap the order)  The transverse momentum fraction .... is related to the fragmentation function and connects

- L11: can provide insights -> can provide additional insight

- L12: jet quenching -> the jet quenching

- L13: "In this talk ...." - I would move this paragraph after D0 RAA in isobar, it feels more natural to first mention D0 R_AA and then production in jets.

- L15: invariant yields of the D0 jets -> invariant yields and nuclear modification factors of the D0 jets and 

- L16: of the transverse momentum fraction -> of z (you define it earlier)

- L16-17: remove "We also measure the nuclear ... and the transverse momentum fraction."

- L18: Additionally, we measure -> Additionally, we present

Cheers,

Barbara

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