STAR HardProbes PWG

[zli1 <zli1 AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hi Yi,

Thanks for your nice suggestions, I upload a new version (v3).

For the first bullet in III and IV, I want to say the subsystems used in 
mu+mu- measurements in the different mass region, since I introduce 3 
subsystems in II but they are not all used in these two mass region.

Best,
Ziyang

On 2023-04-19 14:41, Yi Yang wrote:
> Hi Ziyang,
>
> Sorry for the late reply. I don't have much to comment on your nice
> poster. Just some minor suggestions for your consideration:
>   - I. Introduction: [3, 4] --> move it before the period
>                             Two plots cover the bottom frame a bit
>                             Dimuon channel measurements -->
> Measurements from dimuon channel
>  - III:  first bullet: Figures 1 and 2 are the J/psi yield, so it is a
> bit strange saying "Dimuon measurement in Jpsi mass region", I would
> suggest to "J/psi invariant yields using mu+mu- channel" (or something
> like that)
>  - IV: similar as the previous one: I would suggest to "mu+mu-
> invariant yields at low mass region"
>
> Cheers,
> Yi
>
> On Wed, Apr 19, 2023 at 2:17 PM Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l
> <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
>
> > Helli Ziyang,
> >
> > Thank you for implementing my comments and your reply.
> > I sign off.
> >
> > Due to to time constraint, I am going to pass it to startalk.
> > Please consider Yi's comment in coming days.
> >
> > Cheers
> > Nihar
> >
> > On 2023-04-18 13:57, zli1 wrote:
> > > Hi Nihar,
> > >
> > > Thanks for your nice comments, I upload a new version (v2).
> > >
> > > For the bullets, you mentioned in Section.IV, the signification of
> > the
> > > 2nd angular modulation is less than 3σ, so we didn't use
> > 'indication'
> > > but used 'hint'.
> > >
> > > Best,
> > > Ziyang
> > >
> > > On 2023-04-18 14:48, Nihar Sahoo wrote:
> > > > Hello Ziyang,
> > > >
> > > > Thank you for your nice poster.
> > > > Please find my comments below.
> > > >
> > > >
> > > > Title: "\sqrt S_{\rm NN}" -> Mąkę small "s"
> > > >
> > > > Introduction:
> > > > "…Weizsacker-Williams equivalent photon approximation (EPA)"
> > Please
> > > > provide a reference.
> > > >
> > > > This red colored texts may be not required in 3rd and 4th
> > bullets.
> > > > "at very low pT" -> it would be good if you can give threshold
> > like
> > > > energy of quasi-real photon etc.
> > > > You did not introduce what is ultra-peripheral collisions? People
> > may
> > > > not know UPC in heavy-ion collisions better to say a few words.
> > > >
> > > > 5th bullet is saying same as 4th bullet except the "STAR
> > observation".
> > > > "Evidence of photon interactions in hadronic heavy ion
> > collisions."
> > > > This can be sub-bullet of 4th with "Evidence of photon
> > interactions in
> > > > hadronic heavy ion collisions seen at the STAR experiment.
> > > > And Remove 5th bullet.
> > > >
> > > >
> > > > Section.II
> > > > "Muon PID at STAR" -> "Muon indentification at STAR"
> > > >
> > > > "Measure energy loss, dE/dx cut." -> "Particle identification
> > using
> > > > dE/dX"
> > > > "Trigger on and identify muons." -> "Identification and
> > triggering on
> > > > muon"
> > > >
> > > > Section.IV
> > > >
> > > > "Excesses concentrate below pT" -> "Excess dimuon yield
> > concentrates
> > > > at below pT.."
> > > >
> > > > "Indication of the 4th-order azimuthal angular modulation of
> > μ+μ-
> > > > pairs." And
> > > > "The hint of 2nd-order azimuthal angular modulation."
> > > >
> > > > I think you want to say that the data indicate both the 2nd and
> > 4th
> > > > order angular modulations.
> > > > Is it?
> > > >
> > > >
> > > > Cheers
> > > > Nihar
> > > >
> > > >
> > > > On 2023-04-13 21:25, zli1 via Star-hp-l wrote:
> > > > > Hi Barbara,
> > > > >
> > > > > Thanks for your nice comments, I upload a new version.
> > > > >
> > > > > Best,
> > > > > Ziyang
> > > > > On 2023-04-13 15:52, Barbara Trzeciak wrote:
> > > > > > Hi Ziyang,
> > > > > >
> > > > > > very nice poster. Please see below my comments.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > - General: improve the quality of the plots. I would also
> > suggest
> > > > > > increasing the font size.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Introduction:
> > > > > > - "Evidence of photon interactions ... " - use the same font
> > size as
> > > > > > for the rest of the text.
> > > > > > - Dimuon channel measurements provide additional statistics ->
> > > > > > Dimuon
> > > > > > channel measurements complement the previous results from
> > dielectron
> > > > > > channel
> > > > > >
> > > > > > - Add reference to the plots. Move the text that is below to
> > the
> > > > > > figures to the top.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Muon PID at STAR:
> > > > > > - "Au+Au ..." text on the 1/beta figure is not well visible,
> > either
> > > > > > move it or use a different color.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > J/psi measurements:
> > > > > > - "The invariant yield (left) ... " and "The p_T^2 distribution
> > of
> > > > > > J/psi yield (left) ... " - you can move this text to the
> > figures'
> > > > > > captions, in this way you will have more space to increase the
> > font
> > > > > > size in other places.
> > > > > > - consistent with EPA calculation. [4] -> consistent with EPA
> > > > > > calculations [4].
> > > > > >
> > > > > > μ+μ- continuum measurements:
> > > > > >
> > > > > > - "The μ+μ- excess yields as a function of invariant mass
> > (right)"
> > > > > > and "The p_T^2 distribution of excess yield (left) ... "- same
> > as
> > > > > > before, you can move this text to the figures' captions, in
> > this way
> > > > > > you will have more space to increase the font size in other
> > places.
> > > > > > - as a function of invariant mass (right) ->  as a function of
> > > > > > invariant mass (left)
> > > > > > - in peripheral collisions. -> in peripheral collisions
> > (right).
> > > > > > - delta phi distribution(right) -> delta phi distribution
> > (right),
> > > > > > in
> > > > > > peripheral collisions
> > > > > > - It would be good to define delta phi
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Summary:
> > > > > > - The data are comparable with the EPA calculations indicating
> > ->
> > > > > > The
> > > > > > EPA calculations can describe the data indicating
> > > > > > - Provide the experimental confirmation of the EPA predictions
> > and
> > > > > > can
> > > > > > be used to map -> Can be used to map
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Cheers,
> > > > > > Barbara
> > > > > >
> > > > > > On Thu, Apr 13, 2023 at 3:03 AM zli1 via Star-hp-l
> > > > > > <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
> > > > > >
> > > > > > > Hello Nihar,
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > Sorry for the mistake, and thank you for the help.
> > > > > > > But I haven't found your comments in this link, did I miss
> > > > > > > something?
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > Best,
> > > > > > > Ziyang
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > On 2023-04-12 18:21, Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l wrote:
> > > > > > > > Hello Ziyang,
> > > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > I can see two entries for this poster, hence I rejected the
> > > > > > > following
> > > > > > > > one.
> > > > > > > > > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/63332
> > > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > You will get my comments on the following entry.
> > > > > > > > > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/63331
> > > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > Cheers
> > > > > > > > Nihar
> > > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > On 2023-04-12 14:11, webmaster--- via Star-hp-l wrote:
> > > > > > > > > Dear Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
> > > > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > > Ziyang Li (lzy9404 AT mail.ustc.edu.cn) has submitted a
> > material for
> > > > > > > a
> > > > > > > > > review,
> > > > > > > > > please have a look:
> > > > > > > > > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/63332
> > > > > > > > >
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