STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Isaac, Tristan, Rosi, Nihar, Subhash:

Please find my overall comments on your nice abstract.
I understand this is a bit complicated to write a coherent abstract for 
these multiple observables.

Let me try to attempt shortening the abstract and cohere the physics 
messages.

_Title needs some work.
1. It doesn't cover jet v1 and v2 information
2. "High-pT yield modification" doesn't make sense. something like  
"modification of high-pt hadron yield"
How about?
"Measurement of high-pt hadron yield suppression and jet anisotropy in 
heavy-ion collisions at STAR"

_ Abstract needs to be concise; introduction about jet and jet-quenching 
can be avoided for QM abstract.
everyone knows.
For example, line6-11 intro about jet and jet-quenching are not needed. 
We can directly use jet and the phrase jet-medium interaction here to 
make it concise.
Can you please make another try?

_  (smaller O+O) -> not sure if we could show (or approve as STAR 
preliminary for) at QM2023 due to some ongoing discussion on this 
nascent O+O production.  I would prefer not to mention explicitly, 
better to mention as "relatively smaller system". If we could have 
results by then, we can include it in the presentation that should not 
be a problem.

_ "In a larger system, we can test  whether the system-size independence 
of v1 observed previously by STAR also holds for jets. "
-> I would drop this sentence. This is a secondary point of the 
motivation and not necessary to explicitly mention in this long 
abstract. We can make the statement in the presentation.

_ "Studying jet v2 … dependent quenching effects and the effects which 
give rise to anisotropies in even smaller p+A systems. "
  -> "Studying jet v2 …. dependent quenching effects and the effects."
We don't to have any discussion related to p+A system because we don't 
plan to present any p+A anisotropy results. And such discussion can be 
done in the presentation.


Cheers
Nihar


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