STAR HardProbes PWG

[Barbara Trzeciak <barbara.trzeciak AT gmail.com>]

Hi Andrew,

nice abstract. Please find below my minor comments.

energy-energy Correlator (EEC) -> Energy-Energy Correlator (EEC)

using the data taken from √s = 200 GeV pp collisions measured by the STAR experiment -> using pp collision data at √s = 200 GeV collected by the STAR experiment 

The EEC will be shown differentially -> The EEC is shown differentially

a next-to-leading-logarithmic calculation -> next-to-leading-logarithmic pQCD calculations

Cheers,

Barbara

On Thu, Apr 20, 2023 at 7:57 AM Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hello Andrew,

Please find my comments on your nice abstract.

_ Title: 200GeV -> 200 GeV
_ hadronization, resulting -> hadronization resulting
_ One observable that utilizes the substructure of these jets to study
the information encoded within, describing the time evolution of the
parton shower is the energy-energy Correlator (EEC).
-> "The energy-energy correlator (EEC) observable utilizes the
substructure of jets to study the time evolution of the parton shower."
_ non-perturbative and perturbative effects -> the  perturbative and
non-perturbative QCD effects
_ rejection of constituents. -> rejection of soft constituents.
_ these two distinct regimes: -> the two distinct regimes:
_ effects originating from free hadrons at small opening angles and from
perturbative fragmentation of quarks and gluons at large opening angles.
-> i) from the free hadrons phase at small opening angles, and ii) from
the perturbative fragmentation of quarks and gluons at large opening
angles.
_presented, using the data -> presented using the data
_infrared- and collinear-safe, -> infrared-collinear safe,
_systems, which -> systems which


Cheers
Nihar


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