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Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Jakub Ceska for Quark Matter 2023 submitted for review
- From: Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>
- To: webmaster AT star.bnl.gov, STAR HardProbes PWG <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
- Subject: Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Jakub Ceska for Quark Matter 2023 submitted for review
- Date: Thu, 20 Apr 2023 18:32:31 +0530
Hello Jakub,
Please find my comments on your nice abstract.
General:
Please use Psi -> $\psi$
and p+p -> $p$+$p$
Title, Measurement of Upsilon and J/Psi multiplicity dependent production in p + p = √s = 510GeV ->
"Measurement of multiplicity dependent Upsilon and J/Psi production at √s = 510 GeV in p + p collisions at STAR "
"Proposed explanatory mechanisms, including multi-parton interactions, string screening, and higher gluon radiation are discussed, as well as the guidance this measurement and related probes provide to model calculations." Not clear. Please rephrase.
Herein we present measurements of -> Herein, we present the measurements of
in 510 GeV p+p collisions -> at √s = 510 GeV in p+p collisions
include transverse momentum -> include the transverse momentum
The presented analysis utilises the largest sample of quarkonia the STAR experiment has obtained from p+p collisions in the dielectron channel, therefore both increasing precision and extending the reach into higher multiplicity.
-> In this measurement, the dielectron channel is used to reconstruct quarkonia utilizing high statistics p+p data for the precision measurement as well as to achieve the higher multiplicity events in the STAR experiment.
At the end, you could consider to add "Finally, we compare the data with the Monte Carlo model predictions and discuss their implications." or Something similar.
Cheers
Nihar
On 2023-04-19 19:39, webmaster--- via Star-hp-l wrote:
Dear Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
Jakub Ceska (ceskajak AT fjfi.cvut.cz) has submitted a material for a review,
please have a look:
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/63484
Deadline: 2023-05-01
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Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Jakub Ceska for Quark Matter 2023 submitted for review
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- Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Jakub Ceska for Quark Matter 2023 submitted for review, Barbara Trzeciak, 04/23/2023
- Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Jakub Ceska for Quark Matter 2023 submitted for review, Yi Yang, 04/23/2023
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Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Jakub Ceska for Quark Matter 2023 submitted for review,
Ceska, Jakub, 04/25/2023
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Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Jakub Ceska for Quark Matter 2023 submitted for review,
Nihar Sahoo, 04/26/2023
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Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Jakub Ceska for Quark Matter 2023 submitted for review,
Barbara Trzeciak, 04/26/2023
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Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Jakub Ceska for Quark Matter 2023 submitted for review,
Ceska, Jakub, 04/26/2023
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Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Jakub Ceska for Quark Matter 2023 submitted for review,
Yi Yang, 04/26/2023
- Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Jakub Ceska for Quark Matter 2023 submitted for review, Barbara Trzeciak, 04/27/2023
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Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Jakub Ceska for Quark Matter 2023 submitted for review,
Yi Yang, 04/26/2023
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Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Jakub Ceska for Quark Matter 2023 submitted for review,
Ceska, Jakub, 04/26/2023
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Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Jakub Ceska for Quark Matter 2023 submitted for review,
Barbara Trzeciak, 04/26/2023
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Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Jakub Ceska for Quark Matter 2023 submitted for review,
Nihar Sahoo, 04/26/2023
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[Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Jakub Ceska for Quark Matter 2023 submitted for review,
webmaster, 04/19/2023
- Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Jakub Ceska for Quark Matter 2023 submitted for review, Barbara Trzeciak, 04/19/2023
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Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Jakub Ceska for Quark Matter 2023 submitted for review,
Nihar Sahoo, 04/20/2023
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Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Jakub Ceska for Quark Matter 2023 submitted for review,
Ceska, Jakub, 04/20/2023
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Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Jakub Ceska for Quark Matter 2023 submitted for review,
Nihar Sahoo, 04/21/2023
- Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Jakub Ceska for Quark Matter 2023 submitted for review, Barbara Trzeciak, 04/21/2023
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Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Jakub Ceska for Quark Matter 2023 submitted for review,
Nihar Sahoo, 04/21/2023
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Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Jakub Ceska for Quark Matter 2023 submitted for review,
Ceska, Jakub, 04/20/2023
- Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Jakub Ceska for Quark Matter 2023 submitted for review, Yi Yang, 04/22/2023
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Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Jakub Ceska for Quark Matter 2023 submitted for review,
Ceska, Jakub, 04/25/2023
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Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Jakub Ceska for Quark Matter 2023 submitted for review,
Barbara Trzeciak, 04/26/2023
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Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Jakub Ceska for Quark Matter 2023 submitted for review,
Ceska, Jakub, 04/26/2023
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Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Jakub Ceska for Quark Matter 2023 submitted for review,
Yi Yang, 04/26/2023
- Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Jakub Ceska for Quark Matter 2023 submitted for review, Ceska, Jakub, 04/26/2023
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Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Jakub Ceska for Quark Matter 2023 submitted for review,
Yi Yang, 04/26/2023
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Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Jakub Ceska for Quark Matter 2023 submitted for review,
Ceska, Jakub, 04/26/2023
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Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Jakub Ceska for Quark Matter 2023 submitted for review,
Barbara Trzeciak, 04/26/2023
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