STAR HardProbes PWG

[Kikoła Daniel <Daniel.Kikola AT pw.edu.pl>]

Hi Barbara,

Thank you very much for the comments. Here is the updated abstract: 
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/D-meson-correlations-QM2023-v3.pdf

Best regards,
Daniel

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On Thu, 2023-04-20 at 10:29 +0200, Barbara Trzeciak wrote:
> Hi Daniel, Priyanka, Katarzyna,
> 
> please find below my minor comments to your nice abstract.
> - L4: are yet unknown -> are yet not fully understood.
> - L17: theoretical models -> theoretical model predictions
> 
> Cheers
> Barbara
> 
> On Wed, Apr 19, 2023 at 6:14 PM Daniel Kikoła via Star-hp-l
> <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
> > Hi Nihar,
> > 
> > Thank you very much for your comments. I modified the abstract as
> > you
> > suggested and here is the updated version:
> > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/D-meson-correlations-QM2023-v2.pdf
> > 
> > 
> > Best regards,
> > Daniel
> > 
> > On Wed, 2023-04-19 at 18:42 +0530, Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l wrote:
> > > Hello Priyanka, Katarzyna, and Daniel,
> > > 
> > > Please find my comments on your nice abstract.
> > > (Please include line number it helps)
> > > 
> > > _ "In STAR" -> "at STAR"
> > > _ "nuclear modification factor for charmed mesons" -> nuclear 
> > > modification factor of charmed mesons
> > > _ "Yet, details of these processes are not known in sufficient 
> > > detail,.." -> "However, the complete production mechanism and the
> > > nature 
> > > of charm-medium interaction are yet unknown." (Please make a new 
> > > sentence from here)
> > > _ "…and new experimental results are needed to constrain the
> > > parameters 
> > > of theoretical calculations…" -> "The new observables are needed
> > > to 
> > > constrain the theoretical models and the transport coefficients
> > > of
> > > the 
> > > QGP."
> > > _"help pin down" -> "help to pin down"
> > > _ c quark -> charm quark
> > > _two-particle correlations -> the two-particle correlations
> > > _at low relative -> at the low relative
> > > _"…thus to the interaction of charm quarks with the bulk
> > > partons."
> > > This 
> > > phrase sounds like dangling here.
> > > _"…discuss implications for interactions of charm quarks with the
> > > partonic medium." -> "discuss their implications."
> > > 
> > > Cheers
> > > Nihar
> > > 
> > > On 2023-04-17 21:19, webmaster--- via Star-hp-l wrote:
> > > > Dear Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
> > > > 
> > > > Daniel Kikola (daniel.kikola AT pw.edu.pl) has submitted a
> > > > material
> > > > for a
> > > > review, please have a look:
> > > > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/63403
> > > > 
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