STAR HardProbes PWG

["Ceska, Jakub" <jakub.ceska AT fjfi.cvut.cz>]

Dear Nihar,

thank you for your comments. I have uploaded a new version of the abstract incorporating Barbara's comments and we feel that most of your comments have been addressed. Would you be so kind as to check the new version if it is okay?

Best regards,
Jakub

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Předmět: Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Jakub Ceska for Quark Matter 2023 submitted for review

 

Hello Jakub,

Please find my comments on your nice abstract.

General:
Please use Psi -> $\psi$
and p+p -> $p$+$p$


Title, Measurement of Upsilon and J/Psi multiplicity dependent
production in p + p = √s = 510GeV ->
"Measurement of multiplicity dependent Upsilon and J/Psi production at
√s = 510 GeV in p + p collisions at STAR "

"Proposed explanatory mechanisms, including multi-parton interactions,
string screening, and higher gluon radiation are discussed, as well as
the guidance this measurement and related probes provide to model
calculations." Not clear. Please rephrase.

Herein we present measurements of -> Herein, we present the measurements
of

in 510 GeV p+p collisions -> at √s = 510 GeV in p+p collisions
include transverse momentum -> include the transverse momentum

The presented analysis utilises the largest sample of quarkonia the STAR
experiment has obtained from p+p collisions in the dielectron channel,
therefore both increasing precision and extending the reach into higher
multiplicity.
-> In this measurement, the dielectron channel is used to reconstruct
quarkonia utilizing high statistics p+p data for the precision
measurement as well as to achieve the higher multiplicity events in the
STAR experiment.

At the end, you could consider to add "Finally, we compare the data with
the Monte Carlo model predictions and discuss their implications." or
Something similar.

Cheers
Nihar

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