STAR HardProbes PWG

[wy157543 AT mail.ustc.edu.cn]

Hi Nihar,

Thank you for the nice comments. This is the new version, please have a look:
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/QM2023_poster_v2.pdf

(Is there any other effects that you missed to mention here? It sounds 
like there are other effects other than that listed here; what are those?)

for this question, I think the dissociation, regeneration and cold nuclear 
matter effects are the main effects.
the dissociation include static and dynamic dissociation. maybe I only 
mention the dynamic dissociation in the 
abstract, I will modify it.


best,
Yan

> -----原始邮件-----
> 发件人: "Nihar Sahoo" <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>
> 发送时间: 2023-04-19 20:48:07 (星期三)
> 收件人: wy157543 AT mail.ustc.edu.cn, "STAR HardProbes PWG" 
> <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
> 抄送: webmaster AT star.bnl.gov
> 主题: Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Yan Wang for Quark Matter 2023 
> submitted for review
> 
> Hello Yan,
> 
> Please find my comments on your nice abstract.
> 
> Line1: "…important probe to the properties of the quark-gluon plasma" -> 
> "…important to probe the properties of the quark-gluon plasma"
> Line4: "…interplay of several effects, including dynamic dissociation 
> and …"  -> "…interplay of several effects including dynamic dissociation 
> and …"
> (Is there any other effects that you missed to mention here? It sounds 
> like there are other effects other than that listed here; what are 
> those?)
> Line7: "…     that of J/ψ, comparison of the suppression of J/ψ and ψ(2S) 
> at 
> RHIC can shed …" -> "…that of J/ψ.  The suppression of J/ψ and ψ(2S) 
> yield at RHIC can shed light …"
> LIne10: "…with 4B isobaric collisions…" -> "… by analyzing around 4 
> billions isobar collisions data (…)…"
> 
> 
> Cheers
> Nihar
> 
> On 2023-04-18 12:07, wy157543--- via Star-hp-l wrote:
> > Hi all,
> > 
> > This is my poster abstract.
> > 
> > best,
> > Yan
> > 
> > 
> >> -----原始邮件-----
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> >> 发送时间: 2023-04-18 13:57:27 (星期二)
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> >> 抄送:
> >> 主题: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Yan Wang for Quark Matter 2023 
> >> submitted for review
> >> 
> >> Dear Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
> >> 
> >> Yan Wang (wy157543 AT mail.ustc.edu.cn) has submitted a material for a 
> >> review,
> >> please have a look:
> >> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/63442
> >> 
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