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["Roy Chowdhury Priyanka (DOKT)" <priyanka.roy_chowdhury.dokt AT pw.edu.pl>]

Hi Nihar,

Thanks for your nice comments. I have implemented all your suggestions and changed the title slightly. Please find my updated abstract here https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/QM_poster-abstract_V2.pdf

Regards,

Priyanka

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Hello Priyanka,

Please find my comments on your nice abstract.

_ Title:  in STAR -> at STAR
_ two-particle correlations -> the two-particle correlations
_ which correlated particles -> which the correlated particles
_ the bulk partons. -> "the bulk medium."  Or just "the medium."
_ using data -> using the data
_ If you want, you could add one sentence at the end something related
to physics implication.

Cheers
Nihar




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