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[Barbara Trzeciak <barbara.trzeciak AT gmail.com>]

Hi Yan,

I sign off with minor comment:

- L15: heavy ion collisions -> heavy-ion collisions

Cheers,

Barbara

On Thu, Apr 20, 2023 at 8:12 PM <wy157543 AT mail.ustc.edu.cn> wrote:

Hi Barbara,

Thank you for the nice comments. This is the new version, please have a look:
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/QM2023_merge_v4.pdf

best,
Yan

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主题: Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Yan Wang for Quark Matter 2023 submitted for review

Hi Te-Chuan, Duandan, Yan,

Thank you for the nice merged abstracts. Please see my comments below.

Title: 

Measurement of quarknonium production -> Measurement of quarknonium production and polarization

- L1: Quarkonium is an important probe to the properties -> Quarkonia are important probes of the properties

- L2-3: collisions due to the modification of its yield by the effects of static and dynamic dissociation and -> collisions. Quarkonium yields are modified due to the static and dynamic dissociation and 

- L4: heavy ion collisions -> heavy-ion collisions

- L5-8: "However, many new observables ... to measure the new observables" -> The large-statistics data from isobaric collisions (Ru+Ru and Zr+Zr)  at √ sNN = 200 GeV collected in 2018, provide us with a unique opportunity to extend the previous measurements to new observables and other quarkonium states. 

- L9, 16: heavy ion -> heavy-ion

- L11: machine learning technique -> machine learning techniques

- L15: quarkonium production -> quarkonium production modification in the medium.

- L17: which provides a new degree of -> which provides a new observable for

- L17 and J/ψ production -> and the J/ψ production

Cheers,

Barbara

On Mon, Apr 17, 2023 at 5:02 PM webmaster--- via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Dear Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,

Yan Wang (wy157543 AT mail.ustc.edu.cn) has submitted a material for a review, 
please have a look:
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/63401

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