STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Diptanil and Yuan,

Thank you for addressing my comments.
I see one untouched and some additional comments.

> > Title: "Charm Mesons and Charm Meson Tagged Jets at STAR" ->
> > "Measurement of charm meson production and charm meson tagged jets in 
> > heavy-ion collisions at STAR"
L1: (charm (c) and bottom (b)), -> better to avoid this style 
parenthesis usage
L7: (z = pT,hadron/pT,jet) -> ($z$ = $p_{\rm T,hadron}$/$p_{\rm T,jet})
L12: "Such modifications have been observed at the LHC for inclusive 
jets." Drop this sentence; not adding anything but it devalues the 
STAR's attempt as standalone.
L13: We report the first -> In addition, we report the first
L18: D^0(cu ̄) -> D^0
L19: 200 GeV, collected by the STAR experiment at RHIC. -> "200 GeV." 
Drop rest, not needed
L20: ‘z’-> $z$ [with no ' '] and elsewhere

Cheers
Nihar




On 2023-04-21 22:42, Diptanil Roy wrote:
> Hi Barbara and Nihar, thank you for your comments. I have made the
> changes in this version
> here(https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/QM_2023_Diptanil_Yuan_CharmMesons_v2.pdf).
>
> Thank you.
>
> On Thu, Apr 20, 2023 at 3:18 AM Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l
> <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
>
> > Hello Diptanil and Yuan,
> >
> > Please find my comments on your nice abstract.
> >
> > Title: "Charm Mesons and Charm Meson Tagged Jets at STAR" ->
> > "Measurement of charm meson production and charm meson tagged jets
> > in
> > heavy-ion collisions at STAR"
> >
> > L2: "…excellent probes of the properties …" -> "…excellent
> > probes to
> > study the properties .."
> > L4:Jets tagged -> In addition,  jets tagged
> > L14:GeV, collected ->           GeV that collected
> > L16:in the jets -> in jets
> > L17-18:"…the transverse momentum and the transverse momentum
> > fraction.
> > -> "…the jet transverse momentum and the transverse momentum
> > fraction of
> > jet".
> > Somewhere inside the second para, please mention the pT range of D^0
> > you
> > plan to present.
> >
> > Cheers
> > Nihar
> >
> > On 2023-04-18 09:10, webmaster--- via Star-hp-l wrote:
> > > Dear Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
> > >
> > > Diptanil Roy (roydiptanil AT gmail.com) has submitted a material for
> > a
> > > review,
> > > please have a look:
> > > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/63437
> > >
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