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  • From: Yi Yang <yiyang0429 AT gmail.com>
  • To: STAR HardProbes PWG <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
  • Subject: Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Dandan Shen for Quark Matter 2023 submitted for review
  • Date: Sun, 23 Apr 2023 18:45:40 +0800

Hi Dandan,

Thanks a lot for the nice abstract for the poster. I have some minor comments for your consideration. 
 - Title: Measurements for J/psi polarization  --> Measurement of the J/psi polarization 
 - L8: A strong suppression of J/ψ and zero J/ψ v--> The strong suppression of J/ψ yield and consistent with zero elliptic flow (v2) of J/ψ
 - L9: "RHIC-STAR experiment" is okay, but still suggest just use "the STAR experiment" 
 - L11: Beside J/ψ nulcear (wrong spelling) modification factor and J/ψ azimuthal anisotropy observable, --> Beside nuclear modification factor and v2 observables,
 - L12: new degree --> new angle 
 - L16: could makes --> could make
 - L18: In this talk --> In this work
 - L18: the first J/ψ polarization measurement of in a heavy-ion collision in RHIC energy --> the first measurement of J/ψ polarization in heavy-ion collisions at RHIC energy. 
  - L19: Helicity frame, Collins-Soper frame --> Helicity frame and Collins-Soper frame
  - L20: in Ru+Ru and Zr+Zr --> in Ru+Ru and Zr+Zr collisions 
  - L20: will be present --> will be presented 

Cheers,
Yi





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