STAR HardProbes PWG

[Barbara Trzeciak <barbara.trzeciak AT gmail.com>]

Hi Jakub,

nice abstract. Please find below my comments.

- Upsilon -> $\Upsilon$

- allow the study of -> allow to study

- "Production models are instead used to describe the bound state formation. Comparison of the model calculations to the experimental measurements are utilised to help to improve those models and increase the insight into the production of heavy flavour mesons." - I would remove it (or rephrase, but I'm not sure what you want to say here)

-  the result of a study of Upsilon states ->  measurements of the Upsilon states production via the dielectron decay channel

- 500 GeV p+p collisions-> $p$+$p$ collisions at \sqrt{s} = 510 GeV

- of normalised -> of self-normalised

-  from p+p collisions in the dielectron channel ->  in $p$+$p$ collisions

-  over previous ->  with respect to the previous

Cheers,

Barbara

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