STAR HardProbes PWG

[Yi Yang <yiyang0429 AT gmail.com>]

Hi Jakub,

Thanks a lot for the nice abstract for the poster. I have some minor comments for your consideration. 

  - L1: Upsilon meson production measurements --> Upsilon meson production measurements in heavy-ion collisions 

  - L4: a detailed description of the quarkonium production mechanism --> a detailed description of the quarkonium production mechanism in hadron collisions 

  - L9: presents the result of a study of Upsilon states production --> presents the measurement of Upsilon states production

  - L10: remove ", measured in the dielectron channel." 

  - L12: The main aim of this study is however the dependence of  --> The main goal of this analysis is to study the dependence of 

  - L16: remove "should",  result --> results 

Cheers,

Yi

On Tue, Apr 18, 2023 at 11:19 PM webmaster--- via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

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