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[Barbara Trzeciak <barbara.trzeciak AT gmail.com>]

Hi Shuai,

I sign off with last minor comment:

- L6: states of quarkonium -> quarkonium states

Cheers,

Barbara

On Tue, Apr 25, 2023 at 3:52 AM Shuai Yang <syang AT m.scnu.edu.cn> wrote:

Hello Nihar, Yi and Barbara,

Thank you for your valuable comments.

I implemented all of them in the updated abstract, which can be found in https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/QM2023_Poster_Upsilon_v1.pdf

Best Wishes,

Shuai

On Apr 24, 2023, at 03:49, Barbara Trzeciak via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hi Shuai,

nice abstract, please find below my comments.

- L4: an unique -> a unique

- L4:  quark gluon plasma ->  the quark-gluon plasma

- L5: to color screening, was -> to the color screening was

- L6: Υ states -> quarkonium states

- L14: will be discussed -> are discussed

Cheers,

Barbara

On Sun, Apr 23, 2023 at 12:06 PM Yi Yang via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hi Shuai,

Thanks a lot for the nice abstract for the poster. I have some minor comments for your consideration. 

 - L4: an unique --> a unique 

 - L6: It reads a bit odd that mentioning "the Upsilon states" out of the blue here, so I would suggest to change these two sentences to (just a suggestion): On top of that, different exiting states of quarkonium are expected to dissociate at different temperatures depending on their binding energies, and the Upsilon mesons are the perfect candidates. Therefore, the measurement of such sequential suppression of the Υ states in heavy-ion collisions (you never mentioned heavy-ion collisions in the first paragraph) can be used ...

 - L10: the Upsilon measurements  --> the measurement of Upsilon production 

Cheers,

Yi 

  

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