STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Wei,

Thank you for addressing my comments.
I sign off.

Cheers
Nihar

On 2023-04-25 17:30, 张炜 wrote:
> Hi Yi,
>
> Thank you for your very nice suggestions, I have implemented your
> suggestions. please find the updated poster in this link:
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/63477
>
> Best,
> Wei
>
> ------------------ Original ------------------
>
> From:  "yiyang0429 AT gmail.com"<yiyang0429 AT gmail.com>;
> Date:  Tue, Apr 25, 2023 04:28 PM
> To:  "张炜"<wzhang AT m.scnu.edu.cn>;
> Cc:  "Barbara Trzeciak"<barbara.trzeciak AT gmail.com>; "STAR HardProbes
> PWG"<star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>; "Nihar Sahoo"<nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>;
> Subject:  Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Wei Zhang for Quark
> Matter 2023 submitted for review
>
> Hi Wei,
>
> Thanks a lot for the updated version. I have one minor comment for
> your consideration.
>  L7 - 11: These two sentences now read a bit strange to me. I would
> suggest to change these to:
> However,  the recombination effect of uncorrelated charm-anticharm (cc
> ̄) pairs is suggested to be larger at the LHC and the top RHIC
> energies than that of at lower collision energies, and it complicates
> the interpretation of  the observed J/ψ suppression in heavy-ion
> collisions.
>   (By the way, probably it will be good to use only "recombination" or
> "regeneration".)
>
> It's up to you. I don't have any further comments on it.
>
> Cheers,
> Yi
>
> On Mon, Apr 24, 2023 at 8:57 PM 张炜 <wzhang AT m.scnu.edu.cn> wrote:
>
> > Hi Barbara,
> >
> > Thanks for the very nice comments, I uploaded the updated poster
> > abstract to its original location.
> >
> > Best,
> > Wei
> >
> > ------------------ Original ------------------
> >
> > From:  "Barbara Trzeciak"<barbara.trzeciak AT gmail.com>;
> > Date:  Mon, Apr 24, 2023 08:18 PM
> > To:  "张炜"<wzhang AT m.scnu.edu.cn>;
> > Cc:  "yiyang0429 AT gmail.com"<yiyang0429 AT gmail.com>; "STAR HardProbes
> > PWG"<star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>; "Nihar
> > Sahoo"<nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>;
> > Subject:  Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Wei Zhang for Quark
> > Matter 2023 submitted for review
> >
> > Hi Wei,
> >
> > thanks for the update.
> > I sign off with the following comments addressed:
> >
> > - L8: uncorrelated charm-anticharm (c¯c) pairs is ->
> > charm-anticharm (c¯c) pairs that is
> > - L9: that complicates -> complicates
> > - L17: are discussed -> is discussed
> >
> > Cheers,
> > Barbara
> >
> > On Mon, Apr 24, 2023 at 9:04 AM 张炜 <wzhang AT m.scnu.edu.cn>
> > wrote:
> >
> > Hi Nihar,Yi and Barbara,
> >
> > Thanks very much for your nice comments, please find the updated
> > poster in this link:
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/QM2023_poster_weizhang.pdf
> > Best Wishes,
> > Wei
> >
> > ------------------ Original ------------------
> >
> > From:  "STAR HardProbes PWG"<star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>;
> > Date:  Mon, Apr 24, 2023 04:42 AM
> > To:  "yiyang0429 AT gmail.com"<yiyang0429 AT gmail.com>; "STAR HardProbes
> > PWG"<star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>;
> >
> > Subject:  Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Wei Zhang for Quark
> > Matter 2023 submitted for review
> >
> > Hi Wei,
> >
> > below are my minor comments to your nice abstract.
> >
> > - L2: with the STAR detector -> at STAR
> > - L5: Measurement of -> Measurements of
> > - L5: plays -> play
> > - L7: formation.However -> formation. However (missing space)
> > - L8:  charm-anticharm(cc¯) ->  charm-anticharm (cc¯) (missing
> > space)
> > - L8-9: is suggested to be larger at LHC and top RHIC energies,
> > which add -> adds
> > - L10: Meanwhile. the regeneration -> The regeneration
> > - L14: In this talk -> In this poster
> > - L15: with the -> collected by the
> > - L15: The yields -> The invariant yields
> > - L17: will be discussed -> are discussed
> >
> > Cheers,
> > Barbara
> >
> > On Sun, Apr 23, 2023 at 1:26 AM Yi Yang via Star-hp-l
> > <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
> >
> > Hi Wei,
> >
> > Thanks a lot for the nice abstract for the poster. I have some minor
> > comments for your consideration.
> > - L7: Missing a space in front of "However"?
> > - L8: Add a space before (ccbar)
> > - L9: at LHC --> at the LHC
> > - L14: the J/psi measurements --> the measurements of J/psi
> > - L17: Energy dependence --> Collision energy dependence (or Beam
> > energy dependence)
> >
> > Cheers,
> > Yi
> >
> > On Wed, Apr 19, 2023 at 8:49 PM webmaster--- via Star-hp-l
> > <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
> > Dear Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
> >
> > Wei Zhang (wzhang AT m.scnu.edu.cn) has submitted a material for a
> > review,
> > please have a look:
> > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/63477
> >
> > Deadline: 2023-09-03
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