STAR HardProbes PWG

["Mooney, Isaac" <isaac.mooney AT yale.edu>]

Hi Dandan,

The abstract reads nicely to me. I see that it’s roughly the same as your Quark Matter abstract, so please forgive me for giving you some small additional comments, since I’m new.

Thanks,

Isaac

2: “NN” should be upright (and in l. 9 and 21).

7: This sentence is a bit vague. I would explain why it's important. Something like that the large scale set by the charm mass means the heavy quark pairs are produced early and experience the full medium evolution, interacting with it via dissociation/screening which produce recognizable signatures of that interaction for study.

9: "GeV recorded by the STAR experiment" or similar.

10: "indicating the"

15: "the J/\psi and the QGP's"

18: Some more detail on your measurement would be nice. You probably don't want to overpromise on the corrections and systematic uncertainties, which I understand, but maybe e.g. the decay channel, that it's differential in pT, etc. I don't want to make it overly technical, but a couple of these high-level details shouldn't hurt.

20: Would it be worth explaining why polarization with respect to the event plane tells us something different than the HX and CS frames? Something along the lines of it being connected more directly to the QGP vorticity / initial EM fields than the other two frames, if I understand correctly?

20: "event plane"

On May 25, 2023, at 9:32 AM, Dandan via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hi Isaac, Yi, and Nihar,

This is my abstract for SPIN2023.

Best,
Dandan

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