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["Mooney, Isaac" <isaac.mooney AT yale.edu>]

Hi Priyanka,

On point 1., this was a rewrite of the first bullet of the Motivation section. (“…length and area of homogeneity of emission source” -> “emission source’s length and area of homogeneity”). 

I’m satisfied with your other responses and with the above rewrite, I sign off.

Enjoy the conference!

-Isaac

On Jun 12, 2023, at 5:26 PM, Roy Chowdhury Priyanka (DOKT) <priyanka.roy_chowdhury.dokt AT pw.edu.pl> wrote:

Hello Isaac,

Thanks for your thoughtful feedback. I tried to address most of those and implemented on the updated version.

https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/IS2023_poster_V3_Priyanka.pdf

I have some confusion and comments regarding the points you mentioned.

1. "emission source's length and area of homogeneity" as it currently reads like "area of X" where X is "homogeneity of emission source", which is confusing. -> I am not sure which line you indicated
   
2. In the caption you say "expected shape of C(k*) but don't define k* until the next section. Maybe just move that first bullet from Methodology over to this section, just after the third bullet. Starting: "C is measured..." now instead. I understand things will have to move around a bit but hopefully you can make it work. --> Due to space constraints, introduction to k* is difficult in the "Motivation" section, so I changed the fig 2 caption from C(k*) to correlation function
   
3. You say "Expected shape", but is it only the shape that we care about and not the magnitude of correlation?
   
    --> We surely care about the magnitude of the correlation function but that may varry with different dataset but I tried to indicate the fact that depending on the potential, correlation between a pair of particles could be different which means shape of the correlation (repulsive or attractive)
4. Figure 3 --
   
   Where is the "femtoscopic correlation" depicted in this figure? --> This figure shows the definition of k* for a pair of correlated particles, that's why I mentioned "femtoscopic correlation" on the caption. If it is creating confusion, then I am okay to remove the phrase
   
5. Rest of the points --->>> all are updated
   

Please let me know if you have any other comments. 

Regards,

Priyanka

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From: Mooney, Isaac <isaac.mooney AT yale.edu>
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To: Roy Chowdhury Priyanka (DOKT) <priyanka.roy_chowdhury.dokt AT pw.edu.pl>; STAR HardProbes PWG <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
Subject: Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Priyanka Roy Chowdhury for IS 2023 submitted for review

 

Hi Priyanka,

Sorry for the delay. Below are some small comments I have for your poster.

Thanks,

Isaac

General comment: it's a bit on the wordy side. One example is the Motivation bullet: "One could interpret..."; this could be drastically shortened to e.g. "R ~ extent of interaction between charm, light quarks in a medium" [after in the first bullet saying "length, R,..."]. There are a few other places where this is possible, which would allow you to increase the figure, caption, and equation sizes, making everything more readable and more inviting from a distance. Just take a look at whether you see any other possibilities for abbreviating/trimming.

Abstract: "in relativistic..."; "Quark-Gluon Plasma"; "and the interaction of charm..."; "in 2014"

Motivation:

"Figure - 1" -> "Figure 1" (and throughout).

"emission source's length and area of homogeneity" as it currently reads like "area of X" where X is "homogeneity of emission source", which is confusing.

"of correlation function, C"

Figure 2 --

"for vacuum medium" -> "in the vacuum"

In the caption you say "expected shape of C(k*) but don't define k* until the next section. Maybe just move that first bullet from Methodology over to this section, just after the third bullet. Starting: "C is measured..." now instead. I understand things will have to move around a bit but hopefully you can make it work.

You say "Expected shape", but is it only the shape that we care about and not the magnitude of correlation?

Methodology:

Figure 3 --

Where is the "femtoscopic correlation" depicted in this figure?

D-hadron femtoscopy:

"D^\pm-\pi"

Figure 4 -- To me that doesn't look like a deviation at all if I respect the statistical and systematic uncertainties. Why not use the same-sign plot from slide 21 of the talk you link, where the data disagree more strongly with only Coulomb, and the LL curve is more distinct from the Coulomb?

"D^0 nuclear modification factor (R_AA)..." (Similar for next bullet)

"(v2) (fig. 5b) consistent with models"

"collisions"

Figure 5 -- The x-axes of these two plots are not on an identical scale, right? So you can cut off the x-axis title of the upper panel, but the numerical labels should stay visible.

D0 reconstruction at STAR:

"Figure 8 (a) and (b):"

If they're labeled (a) and (b) in the caption, you should add an (a) and (b) to the figures, as in Figs. 2 and 5.

On Jun 10, 2023, at 1:13 PM, Roy Chowdhury Priyanka (DOKT) via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hi Nihar,

Thanks for your thoughtful comments. Sorry for the delay. Please check the updated version with the implementation of all your feedback.

https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/IS2023_poster_V2_Priyanka.pdf

Regards,

Priyanka

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Subject: Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Priyanka Roy Chowdhury for IS 2023 submitted for review

 

Hello Priyanka,

Please find my comments on your nice abstract below.


  I. Motivation:

"Charm-hadron __correlation__can " -> can you make some adjustment to 
avoid the extra gaps?
Please indicate if these plots are for QGP medium or vacuum.
Introduce QGP here, a short sentence. [or in the abstract mention "the 
Quark Gluons Plasma (QGP)."]


II. Methodology
distribution respectively for correlated -> distribution, respectively, 
for correlated
Event mixing technique to calculate k* for uncorrelated pairs -> Event 
mixing technique to calculate uncorrelated pairs k* …

III. D-hadron femtoscopy

Data suggest .. -> ALICE preliminary data suggest … or ALICE data 
suggest
FIg.4 -> Please include "ALICE preliminary" on this plot indicating this 
is from ALICE preliminary.
strong interaction of c/c with -> Not clear what is "c/c"?

IV. D0 reconstruction at STAR
Figure - 7: D0 decay channel -> Figure - 7: D0 decay topology

V. Analysis & Outcomes
Detector effects corrections: -> TPC detector effects correction:
max. possible no. -> maximum possible number
Fig.10 left -> T_1,2 -> Track_1,2

VI. Summary

How should the correlation functions look like in heavy-ion collisions? 
->

For heavy-ion collisions, QGP and hadronic phase effects on two-particle 
correlations are 
unknown
  -> In heavy-ion collisions, the contribution of QGP and hadronic phase 
to D meson+hadron correlation functions is not well understood. (or well 
studied)

First experimental analysis ->  First measurement

Model study (ex. Lednický–Lyuboshitz) is on the plan to extract 
interaction parameters, like emission source size -> Plan to extract 
interaction parameter, like emission source size, using 
Lednický–Lyuboshitz model.

input on interactions -> input to the interaction …

Model calculations needed that include -> Theoretical inputs are needed 
that include



Cheers
Nihar





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