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[Yi Yang <yiyang AT ncku.edu.tw>]

Dear Dandan and all,

Thanks a lot for the merged abstract. I have some minor comments for your consideration and could you please submit it to the drupal page as before? Thanks. 

 - L1: I would say "Quarkonium and open heavy flavor are important probes to study  ... " 

 - L4: HFE --> heavy-flavor decay electrons (HFE)    (if you agree with the previous comment...)

 - L8:  at different collision energies --> at different collision systems and energies

 - L12: in Beam Energy Scan phase II --> in the  phase II of Beam Energy Scan program

 - L22: I would move this part to L19 right after mentioning J/psi and Upsilon. 

Cheers,

Yi

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On Fri, Jun 23, 2023 at 12:19 PM Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hello Dandan and PAs,

Thank you for implementing my comments.
It is now in good shape.
I sign off.

Regards
Nihar


On 2023-06-23 06:36, Dandan wrote:
> Hi Nihar,
>
> Thank you very much! I have uploaded the new version with your nice
> comments implemented.
>  Here is the new version, please find it at:
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/QM_Abstract_ver5.pdf
>
> Best,
> Dandan
>
> 发件人：Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>
> 发送日期：2023-06-22 15:47:37
> 收件人：Dandan <shendandan AT mail.sdu.edu.cn>
> 抄送人：YiYang <yiyang AT ncku.edu.tw>,Isaac
> <isaac.mooney AT yale.edu>,Wei <wzhang AT m.scnu.edu.cn>,"v.d.prozorova"
> <v.d.prozorova AT gmail.com>,Yan <wy157543 AT mail.ustc.edu.cn>,Te-Chuan
> Huang <tchuang AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>,HP <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
> 主题：Re: Merging of QM abstracts>Hello Dandan and PAs,
>>
>> Please find my comments on your nice abstract.
>>
>>
>> J/ψ  -> $J/\psi$ all places
>>
>> L1-2: "Quarkonia and electrons from heavy-flavor are important probes
> to
>> the properties of the quark-gluon plasma (QGP) created in heavy-ion
>> collisions. " -> Quarkonia and heavy flavor decay electrons (HFE) are
>
>> important probes to study the properties of the quark-gluon plasma
> (QGP)
>> created in heavy-ion collisions.
>>
>> L2-3: "The production rate changes and the directional asymmetry of
> HFE
>> reflect heavy-quark …" Not clear, please rephrase it.
>>
>> L4-5:"Production of quarkonia involves several effects, including
>> dissociation and regeneration in the QGP …" -> "Production of
> quarkonia
>> depends on the dissociation and regeneration processes in the QGP,
> and
>> also on the cold nuclear matter effect."
>>
>> L6-8: "…it is desirable to carry out differential measurements for
>> different quarkonium states and collision energies with high
> precision.
>> " -> "… , it is important to carry out differential precision
>> measurements for various quarkonium states and at different collision
>
>> energies."
>>
>> L9: large-statistics -> large statistics
>>
>> L10: (9644Ru + 9644Ru and 9640Zr + 9640Zr) -> Please try \leftindex.
>> Reference here:
>> https://ctan.math.illinois.edu/macros/latex/contrib/leftindex/leftindex.pdf
> [1]
>>
>> L11:  …obtained from… -> "… data collected in …"
>>
>> L13: In this contribution, … -> In this talk,.. (or just remove)
>>
>> L18:    of the yield suppression for J/ψ  and different Υ states ->
> of the
>> J/psi and \Upsilon states
>> yield suppression …
>>
>> L19: binding energy-dependent  ->     binding-energy dependent
>> L20-21: "In addition, new measurements of J/ψ yields and nuclear
>> modification factors (RAA) in Au+Au different collision energies." ->
>
>> syntax issue, and No required, drop it. It is understood.
>>
>>
>> L23: of Heavy Flavor Electrons (HFE)  -> of HFE
>>
>> L24:    What’s more, the first measurement -> What’s more—the
> first
>> measurement .. [such colloquial tone better to avoid, but it is
> Ok…]
>>
>> L25: …in both Helicity…frames,  which> … in both the
> Helicity… frames
>> which
>>
>> L27: …in these collisions. -> I think this measurement is for one
>> collision energy in Isobar. Is not it? If so, then remove it.
>>
>>
>>
>> Cheers
>> Nihar
>>
>>
>>
>> On 2023-06-21 20:54, Dandan wrote:
>>> Hi All,
>>>
>>> This is our marge abstract for QM2023 , it can be found in this
> link:
>>>
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/QM2023_Abstract_ver3.pdf
>>>
>>> Best,
>>> Dandan
>>>
>>> 发件人：Dandan <shendandan AT mail.sdu.edu.cn>
>>> 发送日期：2023-06-20 11:37:39
>>> 收件人：Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>
>>> 抄送人：Yan <wy157543 AT mail.ustc.edu.cn>,Te-Chuan Huang
>>> <tchuang AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>,Wei
> <wzhang AT m.scnu.edu.cn>,"v.d.prozorova"
>>> <v.d.prozorova AT gmail.com>,YiYang <yiyang AT ncku.edu.tw>,Isaac
>>> <isaac.mooney AT yale.edu>,HP <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
>>> 主题：Re:Re: Merging of QM abstracts
>>>
>>>> Hi Nihar，
>>>>
>>>> Thanks for your comment.
>>>> We discuss and improve the marge abstract. I will send you a new
>>>> version to you.
>>>>
>>>> Best,
>>>> Dandan
>>>>
>>>> From: Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>
>>>> Date: 2023-06-20 10:30:34
>>>> To:  Dandan <shendandan AT mail.sdu.edu.cn>
>>>> Cc:  Yan <wy157543 AT mail.ustc.edu.cn>,Te-Chuan Huang
>>>> <tchuang AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>,Wei
>>>> <wzhang AT m.scnu.edu.cn>,"v.d.prozorova"
>>>> <v.d.prozorova AT gmail.com>,YiYang <yiyang AT ncku.edu.tw>,Isaac
>>>> <isaac.mooney AT yale.edu>,HP <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
>>>> Subject: Re: Merging of QM abstracts>Hello PAs and Dandan,
>>>>>
>>>>> Thank you for bringing this merged abstract.
>>>>> This looks a bit long abstract, could you please make it a
> shorter
>>>>> version?
>>>>> As this is already an accepted by QM organizer and suggested for
>>>> merging
>>>>> then I think you can make it brief on each physics topics to make
>>>> it
>>>>> shorter. please try from your side first.
>>>>>
>>>>> Cheers
>>>>> Nihar
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>> On 2023-06-19 19:40, Dandan wrote:
>>>>>> Hi ,all
>>>>>>
>>>>>> This is our marge abstract for QM2023 , it can be found in this
>>>> link:
>>>>>>
>>>> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/QM2023Abstract_0.pdf
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Best,
>>>>>> Dandan
>
>
>
> Links:
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