STAR HardProbes PWG

[Dandan <shendandan AT mail.sdu.edu.cn>]

Hi Barbara,

Thanks for your nice comments.

Here is the version, please find it at: https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/QM2023_ver8_0.pdf

Best,

Dandan

发件人：Barbara Trzeciak <barbara.trzeciak AT gmail.com>
发送日期：2023-06-26 03:57:28
收件人："Mooney, Isaac" <isaac.mooney AT yale.edu>,STAR HardProbes PWG <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
抄送人：Dandan <shendandan AT mail.sdu.edu.cn>
主题：Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Dandan Shen for Quark Matter 2023 submitted for review

Hi Dandan,

nice abstract. In the interest of time, I'm sending my comments here.

I suggest to simply the title:

Beam energy and system size dependence of heavy flavor production at STAR

- L1:  open heavy-flavor ->  open heavy-flavor hadrons

- L2-4: The change of quarkonia production ... - this sentence is not clear to me. Quarkonia are not good tools to study energy loss, also it's not clear to me what "thermalization levels" means. 

Please rephrase this sentence. I would suggest focusing here on a brief open heavy flavor motivation. In the next sentence you have motivation for quarkonia studies. 

- L3:  heavy-flavor decay electrons -> electrons from heavy-flavor hadron decays

- L8:  states and at -> states at 

- L9: offers this opportunity -> offers opportunity to study the energy and size size dependence of heavy-flavor production

- L10: samples collected in 2018 from isobaric collisions -> samples of isobaric collisions

- L11: and 27 GeV -> 27 and 54 GeV

- L13: the first measurement of ψ(2S) -> the first measurements of ψ(2S) and J/ψ polarization

- L14:  RHIC ->  RHIC, performed in isobaric collisions,

- L14-15: . ψ(2S) is reconstructed via the e +e − ...  the signal significance. - I would remove this sentence. Instead, you should also mention other measurements that are planned to be shown, as suggested below.

- L19-21:  In addition, the first measurement of J/ψ polarization in heavy-ion collisions at RHIC will also be shown in both Helicity and Collins-Soper frames which provides -> J/ψ polarization measurement provides 

Then add before "Furthermore":

New measurements of inclusive J/ψ production in Au+Au collisions at √sNN = 14.6, 19.6 and 27 GeV will be also presented. 

- L23: remove "we will present" 

- L24-25: of HFE that are emitted from the semi-leptonic decay of heavy-flavor hadrons. -> of HFE in Au+Au collisions at √sNN = 54.4 GeV will be shown.

Cheers,

Barbara

On Sun, Jun 25, 2023 at 3:51 PM Mooney, Isaac via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hi Dandan,

No problem! Sorry to delay things for these minor comments. The abstract looks good to me and I sign off.

Thanks,

Isaac

On Jun 25, 2023, at 4:23 AM, Dandan <shendandan AT mail.sdu.edu.cn> wrote:

Hi Isaac，

Thanks for your reminder, it was my mistake, the abstract I submitted was wrong.

Here is the version with your nice comments, please find it at: https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/QM_ver7.pdf

I'll pay attention to checking before uploading abstract.

Best,

Dandan

发件人："Mooney, Isaac" <isaac.mooney AT yale.edu>
发送日期：2023-06-25 10:05:13
收件人：Dandan <shendandan AT mail.sdu.edu.cn>
抄送人：YiYang <yiyang AT ncku.edu.tw>,Nihar <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>,Yan <wy157543 AT mail.ustc.edu.cn>,Te-Chuan Huang <tchuang AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>,Wei <wzhang AT m.scnu.edu.cn>,"v.d.prozorova" <v.d.prozorova AT gmail.com>,"Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov" <Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
主题：Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Dandan Shen for Quark Matter 2023 submitted for review

Hi Dandan,

I was referring to everything after that comment. Sorry for the confusion.

Thanks,

Isaac

On Jun 24, 2023, at 9:55 PM, Dandan <shendandan AT mail.sdu.edu.cn> wrote:

Hi Isaac，

 In the new version(ver.6), "Ru" and "Zr" have been upright, and space on either side of the "+" have been removed

Best,

Dandan

发件人："Mooney, Isaac" <isaac.mooney AT yale.edu>
发送日期：2023-06-25 07:22:18
收件人：Dandan <shendandan AT mail.sdu.edu.cn>
抄送人：YiYang <yiyang AT ncku.edu.tw>,Nihar <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>,Yan <wy157543 AT mail.ustc.edu.cn>,Te-Chuan Huang <tchuang AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>,Wei <wzhang AT m.scnu.edu.cn>,"v.d.prozorova" <v.d.prozorova AT gmail.com>,"Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov" <Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
主题：Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Dandan Shen for Quark Matter 2023 submitted for review

Hi Dandan,

Thanks for the new version. It looks like my comments after the comment on the previous version's line 10 were missed. Let me know if you have a reason you disagree with them and I’m happy to see the error of my ways :).

Thanks,

Isaac

On Jun 23, 2023, at 11:43 PM, Dandan <shendandan AT mail.sdu.edu.cn> wrote:

Hi Yi and Isaac,

Thanks for your nice comments. I have uploaded the new version and submitted the revised marge abstract to the drupal page.

Here is the new version, please find it at: https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/QM_abstract_ver6_0.pdf

Best,

Dandan

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