STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Minika,

Please find my comments on your nice overview slides.

Slide2:

_ "…SoftDrop used …to mitigate non-perturbative effects " -> In fact 
this statement is not correct. SoftDorp is used to mitigate the effect 
of ISR, UE and pileup. For a reference, have a look at one of original 
papers  https://arxiv.org/pdf/1402.2657.pdf

SLide 6and7:
As you discussed in previous slide two corrections methods: RooUnfold 
and MultiFold
I would suggest to put in Title "RooUnfold Method" or similar.

Slide10:
Title "Motivation" comes abruptly after many slides. Needs to say 
Motivation for/of what?

Slide12:
"…and more perturbative" -> a vague statement. Mention why you claim 
this is "perturbative"? Like 1/z trend of AP, DIGLAP…?


SLide18:
In the Lund diagram, mention what is "Δ" ? and relate that with R_g

Slide19:
_"we move from non-perturbative to perturbative region" -> this is again 
a vague statement. Not sure how do you claim this. Because look at my 
comment slide#2.



Best
Nihar


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