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["Mooney, Isaac" <isaac.mooney AT yale.edu>]

Ah, thanks for walking me through it Raghav. I understand better now. I’m happy with your new suggestion for the phrasing. And thanks Monika for updating the slides. I sign off.

It looks like a really interesting workshop, so enjoy and good luck on the talk!

-Isaac

On Jul 3, 2023, at 7:27 AM, Robotkova, Monika via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hello Yi and Isaac,

Thank you very much for your comments, I've implemented them in v2 on Drupal page. I used Raghav's suggestion for the mu observable from their last email.

Best regards,

Monika

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Dear Monika,

Thanks a lot for the nice presentation. I have some minor comments on v1.0 for your consideration. 

  - p2: SoftDrop and CollinearDrop (and following descriptions) should be indented.  (Or the first bullet "Our goal..." should be in the higher level.)  

  - p2: C/A --> Cambridge/Aachen (C/A) 

  - p4: Cambridge/Aachen --> C/A

  - p8: (Again) I am not sure if it is a good idea to refer to other conference's talk. 

Due to the conference approaching, I pushed it to STAR TALK and others can keep commenting there.   

Cheers,

Yi

 

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