STAR HardProbes PWG

[Yi Yang <yiyang AT ncku.edu.tw>]

Dear Youqi,

Sorry for the late response. Thanks a lot for the nice proceedings and I only have some minor comments for your consideration. 

 - Title and abstract: It would be good to mention STAR and the collision energy.

 - L10: with groomed jet observables --> with groomed jet observables in pp collisions at 200 GeV by STAR

 - Eqs.1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6,7 : add a comma at the end

 - L63: add "in pp collisions at 200 GeV" 

 - L91: add a reference for PYTHIA6

 - L92: reference for PYTHIA STAR? 

 - L93: add a reference for GEANT

 - L102 and L108: I would use "Fig. 1" instead of "Figure 1", but it is up to you.

 - L110: add a reference for HERWIG

 - L138: is it possible to provide more physics meaning of this mu variable? 

 - L144: Figure 3 --> Fig. 3

 - Figure 5 caption: The mu distributions 

 - L149: add "in pp collisions at 200 GeV from STAR"

 

Cheers,

Yi

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Yi Yang, Professor
Department of Physics / 

Director of Science Education Center

National Cheng Kung University
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On Fri, Jun 23, 2023 at 6:31 AM webmaster--- via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

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Youqi Song (youqi.song AT yale.edu) has submitted a material for a review, 
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