STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Monika,

Sorry for being late.
Please find my comments on your nice proceedings.

Abstract:
In particular, we explore… -> In these proceedings, we explore…

L15: non-perturbative (hadronization) processes. -> non-perturbative QCD 
(hadronization) processes.  [here QCD is important]

L24:	shared momentum fraction (𝑧g) and groomed radius 𝑅g  -> shared 
momentum fraction  and groomed radius  [as you already mentioned z_g and 
R_g]

L26: study the different parts of Lund Plane [4]. ->study the kinematic 
region of Lund Plane [4].  [Same for L84 and L90]
L28: To study the soft component of the jet usually removed by SoftDrop 
technique, CollinearDrop [5] is used. -> This stentence doesn't sound 
correct. Especially "CollinearDrop is used." for what?

L33:     …angular observables it  ->         …angular observables, it i
study mass observables -> study the jet mass observables

L34: Mass observables -> The jet mass observables

Eq.3 If you make "p_g" bold letter, then no need to use arrow on it. 
Remove arrow on p_g.

L38:    of the subjet and 𝑀g is mass of the groomed jet.  -> of the subjet.

L39: First observable Δ𝑀/𝑀 can provide the information about amount of 
mass groomed away -> First observable Δ𝑀/𝑀 provides the information 
about the amount of mass groomed away

L42: 42 Analysed data were collected in 𝑝+𝑝 -> The p+p data were 
collected, in 2012, at sqrt(s) = 200 GeV by …
L43: Since data are affected by the finite instrumental resolution,
-> 	Since the data are affected by the detector effects, … [here "finite 
instrumental resolution" doesn't make sense]
L45:            For this purpose we use  two -> For this purpose, we use  the 
two
… is (2+1)D unfolding -> What is "(2+1) D unfolding"? Do you mean 2D or 
3D? Mention "by RooUnfold [ ]" in this sentence.
L50:            on the y-axis and perform  ->                on the y-axis, 
and perform
L82:            Since 0 value  -> Since the zero value

Cheers
Nihar









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