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Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Youqi Song for DIS 2023 submitted for review
- From: Youqi Song <youqi.song AT yale.edu>
- To: Yi Yang <yiyang AT ncku.edu.tw>, STAR HardProbes PWG <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
- Subject: Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Youqi Song for DIS 2023 submitted for review
- Date: Fri, 14 Jul 2023 12:24:55 -0400
Hi Yi,
Thanks for the comments. I have implemented all your suggestions and uploaded a new version on drupal. Regarding your comment
- L138: is it possible to provide more physics meaning of this mu variable?
I checked Monika's HP proceedings and added something similar to hers "... an observable that captures the mass sharing of the hard splitting."
Best,
Youqi
On Fri, Jul 14, 2023 at 1:04 AM Yi Yang via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
Dear Youqi,Sorry for the late response. Thanks a lot for the nice proceedings and I only have some minor comments for your consideration.- Title and abstract: It would be good to mention STAR and the collision energy.- L10: with groomed jet observables --> with groomed jet observables in pp collisions at 200 GeV by STAR- Eqs.1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6,7 : add a comma at the end- L63: add "in pp collisions at 200 GeV"- L91: add a reference for PYTHIA6- L92: reference for PYTHIA STAR?- L93: add a reference for GEANT- L102 and L108: I would use "Fig. 1" instead of "Figure 1", but it is up to you.- L110: add a reference for HERWIG- L138: is it possible to provide more physics meaning of this mu variable?- L144: Figure 3 --> Fig. 3- Figure 5 caption: The mu distributions- L149: add "in pp collisions at 200 GeV from STAR"Cheers,Yi+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++Yi Yang, Professor
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+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++_______________________________________________On Fri, Jun 23, 2023 at 6:31 AM webmaster--- via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:Dear Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
Youqi Song (youqi.song AT yale.edu) has submitted a material for a review,
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