STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Tanmay,

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Nihar

On 2023-07-12 03:05, Tanmay Pani wrote:
> Hi Nihar,
>
> Thanks for the helpful comments. Here is the updated version with them
> implemented:
>
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/Proceeding-2023_1.pdf
>
> Cheers,
>
> Tanmay
>
> On Tue, Jul 11, 2023 at 3:20 AM Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>
> wrote:
>
> > Hello Tanmay,
> >
> > Please find my comments on your nice proceedings.
> >
> > Abstract:
> > observables from RHIC, using… -> observables, using… GeV
> > collected by
> > the STAR experiment.
> > Finally, data -> Finally, the data…
> > "This work is supported by the National Science Foundation under
> > Grant
> > number: 1913624." -> Drop this in the abstract. You should add in
> > the
> > Acknowledgment.
> >
> > L9:early stages of high-enregy -> early stage of high energy hadron
> > collisions [ because jet is more generic for pp collisions]
> > L10: dense bunchings of hadrons called jets -> as collimated sprays
> > of
> > hadrons called jets.
> > L12:    have  modified fragmentations… -> get modified relative to
> > its p+p
> > baseline. This is known as jet quenching [1].
> >
> > L13: jets are probes of QGP -> jets are used as probes of the QGP.
> > L14: One way to access this information ->No clear, what
> > information?
> > L17:    Parameters 𝜅 and 𝛽 tune sensitivity  -> The 𝜅 and
> > 𝛽 are parameters
> > sensitive to…collimation, respectively.
> > L18: are infra-red -> is infra-red …angularity[],…which probes
> > …around
> > the jet axis.
> > L20: given by: -> given by,
> > Eq.1: Introduce pT,jet in the text
> > Eq.2: put "," at then end of the equation-2
> > Eq-3: put "period" at then of the equation-3
> >
> > L22: Prior angularity based jet-substructure measurements… -> The
> > jet
> > angularity based observables like jet-substructure measurements in
> > Pb+Pb
> > collisions at sqrt(s_NN) = 2.76 GeV, at the LHC, have shown …
> >
> > L25: 𝑝T,jetfrom  -> 𝑝T,jet at RHIC,
> > With higher interaction time in the QGP -> Drop it, nor required.
> > [Note:
> > at LHC energy, QGP time is large than at RHIC]
> >
> > L26: will help understand … -> …will help to understand the
> > jet-medium …
> > with LHC.
> >
> > L29: measured from -> measured in p + p collisions at sqrt(sNN) =
> > 200
> > GeV to set a baseline for heavy-ion collisions at RHIC.
> > [Drop other sentence. Make it short and clear]
> >
> > L31: a non angularity-based -> a non-angularity based …
> > L32: splitting in the jet -> splitting of jet
> >
> > L33: Data Selection and … -> Dataset and …
> > L35-36: … GeV, collected…[]respectively. -> … GeV
> > collected…[],
> > respectively.
> >
> > L36: TPC and BEMC ….->  The Solenoidal Tracker At RHIC (STAR)
> > detector
> > provides full…
> > L39: resolution parameter (𝑅) of 0.4,  ->              resolution
> > parameter 𝑅 =
> > 0.4,
> > L41: the larger heavy-ion analysis -> the larger heavy-ion
> > background
> > L43: atleast -> at least
> > L45: reduce fake jet -> reduce the fake jet
> > L49:    …was trained using using a simulation of detector effects
> > and … ->
> > …was trained using a simulation of detector effects, and …
> > L53: were associated. -> were used.
> > L53: The 𝜌(r) results were corrected … -> The 𝜌(r)  was
> > corrected … [ I
> > prefer in present tense through out the draft, please change it if
> > possible]
> > L54: obtained using the aforementioned embedding simulation1. ->
> > obtained from the aforementioned embedding simulation1.
> >
> > L55: Results and Discussions  ->                Result and
> > Discussion
> >
> > L56: Differential jet-shape (𝜌(r)) -> Differential jet-shape as a
> >
> > function … axis is shown…
> >
> > Fig.1 caption:  show ratio -> show the ratio …
> >
> > Footer of 2nd page: "with thw unfolding" -> with the unfolding
> >
> > L60: PYTHIA-8 Detroit/RHIC -> PYTHIA-8 Detroit
> > L61: show good agreement ->             show a good agreement
> >
> > L64:    it away. -> it.
> > Figs. 3 and 4 -> Fig. 3 and 4 show the STAR data comparison with
> > PYTHIA-8…
> > L65: …(quark jets) and (c) -> …(quark jets), and (c) …
> >
> > L67: "on avenger" -> this is used multiple time. Please remove this.
> > It
> > reads awkward.
> > L70: PYTHIA 8 -> PYTHIA-8
> > L74: core jets p+p collisions -> core jets in p+p collisions
> > setting the baseline for calculating… -> setting the baseline for
> > heavy-ion collisions to measure the medium-modification at RHIC.
> > [200
> > GeV is not needed to mention]
> > L75-76: With the …be noted. -> This sentence needs to be
> > rephrased.
> >
> > Cheers
> > Nihar
> >
> > On 2023-07-08 02:56, Tanmay Pani wrote:
> > > Hi Nihar,
> > >
> > > It seems like this entry was not opening the pdf for some reason,
> > I
> > > have reuploaded the pdf here:
> > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/Proceeding-2023_0.pdf
> > > Please let me know if you can open it or not.
> > >
> > > Thanks
> > >
> > > Tanmay
> > >
> > > On Fri, Jul 7, 2023 at 6:01 AM Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l
> > > <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
> > >
> > > > Hello Tanmay,
> > > >
> > > > Can you please check this entry?
> > > > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/64227
> > > >
> > > > It shows "Access denied".
> > > >
> > > > Best
> > > > Nihar
> > > >
> > > > On 2023-07-05 18:43, Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l wrote:
> > > > > Hello Tanmay,
> > > > >
> > > > > I can see there are two entries on the same proceedings of
> > HP2023.
> > > > > So I am going to rejecting this entries.
> > > > > and we will only keep the entry with 64227 and I will send
> > comment
> > > > on
> > > > > it.
> > > > >
> > > > > Cheers
> > > > > Nihar
> > > > >
> > > > > On 2023-07-02 10:30, webmaster--- via Star-hp-l wrote:
> > > > > > Dear Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Tanmay Pani (tp543 AT physics.rutgers.edu) has submitted a
> > material
> > > > for a
> > > > > > review, please have a look:
> > > > > > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/64226
> > > > > >
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