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["Mioduszewski, Saskia" <mio AT comp.tamu.edu>]

Dear Anders,

I was asked by STAR management to help review your poster.

It is a very nice and clear poster, and I have only a few comments.

Add the QM2023 logo somewhere on the poster.

Headers 4. And 5.:  I would include “Decay” in the titles of these sections:

"Dimuon Decay Channel" and "Dielectric Decay Channel".

Under Dimuon Channel:

I’m not sure I understand the y-axis label correctly.  Is this not the distribution of the counts per 0.02 GeV/c^2?  

Shouldn’t the unit have the 0.02 in the denominator with the GeV/c^2?

In your list of track selection cuts and PID cuts, every cut is listed quantitatively (with the cut values), except the track-matching distance to the MTD hit.

For consistency, it would be good to add that value.

Best regards,

Saskia

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