STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Andrew,

I can't see any changes in the poster.
Have you applied in "Tamis_QM2023_Poster_Draft_v1.pdf "?

Best
Nihar

On 2023-08-28 14:13, Andrew Tamis wrote:
> Hello Nihar,
>
> Thank you for the nice comments, I have implemented them and uploaded
> a new version
>
> Best,
> Andrew
>
> On Sun, Aug 27, 2023 at 8:23 AM Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l
> <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
>
> > Hello Andrew,
> >
> > Please find my comments on your nice posters.
> >
> > Motivation:
> >
> > 1_ I think those cartoons belong to Section EEC where you mention
> > the
> > expression.
> > Please move it. And you can make some adjustment in the wording of
> > last
> > sentence then.
> >
> > 2_ Please mention what are E_i,j and pT_jet
> >
> > STAR experiment..
> >
> > 3_ "GEANT (detector level) and PYTHIA (particle level)" -> In plot,
> > you
> > used "measured" and "true".
> > Please use consistent label then.
> >
> > Results:
> >
> > 4_ "Behavior in non-perturbative region reflects behavior of
> > particles
> > uniformly distributed in phase-space determined via a toy model" ->
> > Not
> > clear, what you want to say here? Please rephrase it.
> >
> > 5_ "Consistent with measurements from ALICE and CMS" -> Give
> > references
> >
> > 6_ "𝒑𝐓𝑱𝒆𝒕" -> correct it, make consistent through out
> > the poster.
> >
> > 7_ Jet Radius -> Jet radius
> >
> > Cheers
> > Nihar
> >
> > On 2023-08-23 03:06, webmaster--- via Star-hp-l wrote:
> > > Dear Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
> > >
> > > Andrew Tamis (andrew.tamis AT yale.edu) has submitted a material for
> > a
> > > review,
> > > please have a look:
> > > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/64817
> > >
> > > Deadline: 2023-09-03
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