STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Katarzyna,

Please find my comments on your nice poster.

General: Make your text size a bit smaller and figures' size bigger. In 
poster, your text will appear sufficiently large.

Abstract:
 I am Ok with your this style of presenting poster without abstract. It 
is upto you.

But for Introduction, if you could put only a few sentences or phrases 
for your motivation, that would be good. And also a motivated 
figure/plot, visually it draws attention.
Generally, in Poster session, visitors don't want to give time to read, 
rather your text should attract them. [A suggestion]
Please work on it.

Data selection:

You could shorten you text and make your QA plots in bigger size.
_People may wonder to know what is Vz and Vz^vpd, DCA, etc. Either you 
explain or write in text

Invariant mass… :

Can you please move your figure up and text at bottom? And make bigger 
in size.

Azimuthal correlations of …

_"We present the azimuthal correlation analysis for data collected by 
the STAR experiment in 2014 and 2016 for Au+Au collisions at √sNN = 200 
GeV." Not needed you already mentioned.

_where: -> where F( ) and B()…
_ "f" ->make italic
_ region to to sum -> region to the sum

_ You need to use the same label of Y-axis (like pi/N_pair) as your main 
results. Do you need?

_Here you could mention key sources of systematic uncertainty

Results:
Mention at least one sentence, what do you get or conclusion?
Herwig++ -> Needs citation.

Conclusion:
You could add,
"A precision measurement is warranted." Or something similar.


Main Fig:
_ pD > 1 GeV/c, pD > 1 GeV/c -> pD^0, pDbar^0 > 1 GeV/c
_ "Correlation signal (raw yield): 34 ± 31"  can you please confirm this 
number?


Cheers
Nihar




On 2023-08-28 14:18, Gwiździel Katarzyna  via Star-hp-l wrote:
> Dear Sooraj, HP-conveners,
>
>  I have some technical issues iwth Drupal.
>  Therefore, Daniel has added a poster on my behalf.
>  Please find my poster at the link:
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/64969.
>
>  Best regards,
>  Katarzyna
>
> -------------------------
>
> Od: Sooraj Radhakrishnan <skradhakrishnan AT lbl.gov>
> Wysłane: piątek, 25 sierpnia 2023 05:24
> Do: STAR HardProbes PWG <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
> DW: Gwiździel Katarzyna (DOKT) <katarzyna.gwizdziel.dokt AT pw.edu.pl>
> Temat: Re: [Star-hp-l] QM2023 poster
>
> Hi Katarzyna,
>    Could you submit the poster via the drupal interface for reviewing
> and approving presentations?
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/add/starpresentations
>
> thanks
> Sooraj
>
> On Thu, Aug 24, 2023 at 2:16 PM Gwiździel Katarzyna (DOKT) via
> Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
>
> > Dear HP-conveners,
> >
> > I have uploaded my poster on drupal for the upcoming Quark Matter
> > conference.
> > Here is the link:
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/QM2023_poster_D0_angCorr_STAR.pdf.
> > As it was suggested at the meeting we stayed with the old title and
> > abstract and added the note about the femtoscopic part.
> >
> > Please let me know if you have any comments.
> > Thank you in advance.
> >
> > Best regards,
> > Katarzyna Gwiździel
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