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Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Wei Zhang for Quark Matter 2023 submitted for review
- From: Yi Yang <yiyang0429 AT gmail.com>
- To: STAR HardProbes PWG <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
- Cc: 张炜 <wzhang AT m.scnu.edu.cn>, webmaster <webmaster AT star.bnl.gov>
- Subject: Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Wei Zhang for Quark Matter 2023 submitted for review
- Date: Tue, 29 Aug 2023 19:09:07 +0800
Hi Wei,
Thanks a lot for the updated version (v3). I only have some minor follow-up comments for your consideration.
- General: "bars" for sqrt() are too thick, is it possible to make them thinner?
- 2. STAR detector:
- Make the title in the center, it is off to the right a bit.
- Itemize the sub bullets, like "Tracking" and "PID with dE/dx"
- 3. Analysis procedure:
- Remove all the "periods"
- J/psi Shape --> J/psi shape
- 4. Results and conclusion --> Results and conclusions
- In the future , We... --> In the future, we ...
Cheers,
Yi
On Tue, Aug 29, 2023 at 3:39 AM 张炜 via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
Hello Yi and Nihar,Thanks for your very useful suggestion, I updated my poster: https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/64944
Best,Wei_______________________________________________------------------ Original ------------------From: "STAR HardProbes PWG"<star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>;Date: Mon, Aug 28, 2023 11:40 AMTo: "STAR HardProbes PWG"<star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>;Subject: Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Wei Zhang for Quark Matter 2023 submitted for reviewHi Wei,Thanks a lot for the nice poster. I have some minor comments for your consideration.- Abstract: it looks like it has a bigger font size than other sections, could you please check and make them the same?sqrt(SNN) --> sqrt(sNN) ("s" should be in lower case.)- STAR detector should go before the analysis procedure (especially before showing any data plots). It would be also nice to mention the dataset and selections you are using before it.- Results and conclusions:RAA --> R_AAsqrt(SNN) --> sqrt(sNN) ("s" should be in lower case.)Indicate what are the shedded areas in the RAA plots (bottom-left and top-right).Cheers,YiOn Sat, Aug 26, 2023 at 3:26 AM webmaster--- via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:Dear Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
Wei Zhang (wzhang AT m.scnu.edu.cn) has submitted a material for a review,
please have a look:
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/64944
Deadline: 2023-09-03
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[Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Wei Zhang for Quark Matter 2023 submitted for review,
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Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Wei Zhang for Quark Matter 2023 submitted for review,
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