STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Dandan,

Please find my comments on your nice poster. With these implemented I 
sign off.


Motivation and Introduction:

_ You have not define what is "Lambda_psi" in Lambda_inv expression? 
Please mention it.

Analysis Procedure:
_ "...𝑐𝑜𝑠𝜃 𝑎𝑛𝑑 𝜙 ..." -> ... 𝑐𝑜𝑠𝜃 and 𝜙

Results and Conclusions:
_ 𝜆_inv as a function of 𝑝T and centrality are consistent between HX and 
CS frames
   -> 𝜆_inv as a function of 𝑝T and centrality are consistent between HX 
and CS frames, and their values are zero, within uncertainty.


Cheers
Nihar

On 2023-08-30 10:28, Ma, Rongrong wrote:
> Hello Dandan
>
> Thanks for addressing my comments. I have a few final ones:
>
> ABSTRACT
> - remove ", as well as with respect to the event-plane, " since you do
> not show them
>
> MOTIVATION AND INTRODUCTION
> - can alter -> can potentially alter
>
> ANALYSIS PROCEDURE
> - tuning of J/psi distribution according to data -> tuning of J/psi
> polarization in simulation according to data
>
> Best
> Rongrong
>
> > On Aug 29, 2023, at 4:57 PM, Dandan <shendandan AT mail.sdu.edu.cn>
> > wrote:
> >
> > Hi Rongrong, Isaac and Yi,
> >
> > Thanks for your nice comments.
> > Here is the new version. Please find it in the Link:
> > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/Dandan_QM2023_v4_1.pdf
> >
> > Best,
> > Dandan
> >
> > 发件人：Yi Yang via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
> > 发送日期：2023-08-29 18:26:26
> > 收件人：STAR HardProbes PWG <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
> > 抄送人：Yi Yang <yiyang0429 AT gmail.com>,webmaster AT star.bnl.gov
> > 主题：Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Dandan Shen for Quark
> > Matter 2023 submitted for review
> >
> > Hi Dandan,
> >
> > Thanks a lot for the nice poster. I have some very minor comments
> > for your consideration.
> > - General: you can remove all the "periods" since some of the items
> > are not a complete sentence.
> > - Title: the bar for the sqrt() is not aligned well.
> > - Abstract: the bar for the sqrt() is a bit thicker.
> > - Motivation: extra space between feed-down and structure?
> > - Analysis procedure:
> > - "Iterative procedure" should be in bold and an item
> > - Figure2 --> Figure 2  (miss a space)
> > - Results and Conclusions:
> > - No captions for these two plots, please add (or move the
> > captions for Figure 1 and 2)
> > - no pT dependence --> no obvious pT dependence
> > - Remove the question mark
> >
> > Cheers,
> > Yi
> >
> > On Tue, Aug 22, 2023 at 6:00 PM webmaster--- via Star-hp-l
> > <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
> > Dear Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
> >
> > Dandan Shen (shendandan AT mail.sdu.edu.cn) has submitted a material
> > for a
> > review, please have a look:
> > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/64806
> >
> > Deadline: 2023-09-03
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