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[Dandan <shendandan AT mail.sdu.edu.cn>]

Hi Nihar,

Thanks for your nice comments.

Please find my new version in the link: https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/Dandan_QM2023_v4_2.pdf

Best,

Dandan

发件人：Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov> 发送日期：2023-08-30 13:25:03 收件人："Ma, Rongrong" <marr AT bnl.gov> 抄送人：Dandan <shendandan AT mail.sdu.edu.cn>,STAR HardProbes PWG <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>,Yi Yang <yiyang0429 AT gmail.com>,Isaac <isaac.mooney AT yale.edu>,Qian <yangqian2020 AT sdu.edu.cn> 主题：Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Dandan Shen for Quark Matter 2023 submitted for review>Hello Dandan, > >Please find my comments on your nice poster. With these implemented I >sign off. > > >Motivation and Introduction: > >_ You have not define what is "Lambda_psi" in Lambda_inv _expression_? >Please mention it. > >Analysis Procedure: >_ "... ..." -> ... and > >Results and Conclusions: >_ _inv as a function of T and centrality are consistent between HX and >CS frames > -> _inv as a function of T and centrality are consistent between HX >and CS frames, and their values are zero, within uncertainty. > > >Cheers >Nihar > >On 2023-08-30 10:28, Ma, Rongrong wrote: >> Hello Dandan >> >> Thanks for addressing my comments. I have a few final ones: >> >> ABSTRACT >> - remove ", as well as with respect to the event-plane, " since you do >> not show them >> >> MOTIVATION AND INTRODUCTION >> - can alter -> can potentially alter >> >> ANALYSIS PROCEDURE >> - tuning of J/psi distribution according to data -> tuning of J/psi >> polarization in simulation according to data >> >> Best >> Rongrong >> >>> On Aug 29, 2023, at 4:57 PM, Dandan <shendandan AT mail.sdu.edu.cn> >>> wrote: >>> >>> Hi Rongrong, Isaac and Yi, >>> >>> Thanks for your nice comments. >>> Here is the new version. Please find it in the Link: >>> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/Dandan_QM2023_v4_1.pdf >>> >>> Best, >>> Dandan >>> >>> 发件人：Yi Yang via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> >>> 发送日期：2023-08-29 18:26:26 >>> 收件人：STAR HardProbes PWG <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> >>> 抄送人：Yi Yang <yiyang0429 AT gmail.com>,webmaster AT star.bnl.gov >>> 主题：Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Dandan Shen for Quark >>> Matter 2023 submitted for review >>> >>> Hi Dandan, >>> >>> Thanks a lot for the nice poster. I have some very minor comments >>> for your consideration. >>> - General: you can remove all the "periods" since some of the items >>> are not a complete sentence. >>> - Title: the bar for the sqrt() is not aligned well. >>> - Abstract: the bar for the sqrt() is a bit thicker. >>> - Motivation: extra space between feed-down and structure? >>> - Analysis procedure: >>> - "Iterative procedure" should be in bold and an item >>> - Figure2 --> Figure 2 (miss a space) >>> - Results and Conclusions: >>> - No captions for these two plots, please add (or move the >>> captions for Figure 1 and 2) >>> - no pT dependence --> no obvious pT dependence >>> - Remove the question mark >>> >>> Cheers, >>> Yi >>> >>> On Tue, Aug 22, 2023 at 6:00 PM webmaster--- via Star-hp-l >>> <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote: >>> Dear Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov members, >>> >>> Dandan Shen (shendandan AT mail.sdu.edu.cn) has submitted a material >>> for a >>> review, please have a look: >>> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/64806 >>> >>> Deadline: 2023-09-03 >>> --- >>> If you have any problems with the review process, please contact >>> webmaster AT www.star.bnl.gov >>> _______________________________________________ >>> Star-hp-l mailing list >>> Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov >>> https://lists.bnl.gov/mailman/listinfo/star-hp-l