STAR HardProbes PWG

["张炜" <wzhang AT m.scnu.edu.cn>]

Hi Barbara,

I implemented all of your suggestions, and it's worth mentioning that for your suggestion to specify published results in the legend, I used black dots for published results and red dots for preliminary results.

You can find the latest version of the poster here: https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/64944

Best,

Wei

 

 

 

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From:  "Star-talks-l"<star-talks-l AT lists.bnl.gov>;

Date:  Fri, Sep 1, 2023 05:26 PM

To:  "Star-talks-l"<star-talks-l AT lists.bnl.gov>;

Cc:  "Barbara Trzeciak"<barbara.trzeciak AT gmail.com>; "webmaster"<webmaster AT star.bnl.gov>;

Subject:  Re: [Star-talks-l] STAR presentation by Wei Zhang for Quark Matter 2023 submitted for review

 

Hi Wei,

nice poster, I have a few comments:

- Motivation: the plot is very small. Try to increase the size, you can move the reference on a side. And instead of "(STAR Collaboration) Phys ... " you can use "STAR, Phys ..."

- STAR detector: we don't really go to high pT (depending what you consider high pT), this is more an argument for BEMC. I would just write for TOF: "Time of flight, particle identification"

- Resolution of your inv. mass plots is not good. Please improve those plots.  I also suggest to specify in addition the energy in a bigger font above each figure.

- J/ψ → e+ + e-: you can add breaching ratio here

- Results: specify on your pT spectra plot that it's J/psi pT spectra. You can add "J/psi -> e^+e^-" e.g. below "Au+Au , 0-80%" text

- J/psi R_AA vs \sqrt{s_NN} plot:

   specify in the legend published results

   add reference to the model

- "We measure inclusive ...": don't you miss the NA50 reference [3] here ?

Cheers,

Barbara

On Tue, Aug 29, 2023 at 9:42 AM webmaster--- via Star-talks-l <star-talks-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Dear star-talks-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,

Wei Zhang (wzhang AT m.scnu.edu.cn) has submitted a material for a review, 
please have a look:
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/Quark-Matter-2023/Energy-dependence-Jpsi-production-AuAu-collisions-sqrtsrm-NN-146-1-0

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