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[Saehanseul Oh <hanseul AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Tanmay,

Please find a few comments on your slides below.

Thanks,
Hanseul

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(Page numbers are based on the pdf page number, not based on the number 
in the bottom right corner.)

p.1: In the title, I will change the line after STAR. Separating "200" 
and "GeV" doesn't look great. Also, "sqrt(s) -> "sqrt(s_NN)".
p.5:
- Use italic "p" for p_T^D, and upright T and D. (p.17,18, and 32 as 
well)
- "Leading", "Subleading" -> "lead", "sublead" to be consistent with 
p.19.
- I guess you can further exaggerate the difference between two jet 
pictures in the bottom right corner.
p.12: sqrt(s) -> sqrt(s_NN)
P.13:
- Use upright "T" for anti-k_T
- FASTJET library -> FASTJET package
- N_con,charged -> N_const^charged (Same on p. 14 and 17)
p.15: N_charged,jet -> N_const^charged, p_{T, jet} -> p_{T,jet}, g_jet 
-> g, p_T,jet^D -> p_T^D
p.20:
- Text on p.17-19 needs to be located in the same place as p.20
- "harder" <- It has to be "harder fragmented", isn't it?
p.21, 22, 23 need to have different slide numbers. And pp results need 
an entry in the legend in plots.
Text on p.21 and 22 needs to be located in the same place as p.23
p.26 needs to have a new slide number. If you don't have enough time, 
you can remove p.25 and 26 as we talked during the rehearsal.
p.27-32 are not necessary. You can show the conclusion and outlook in a 
single page.




On 2023-09-03 09:11, Tanmay Pani via Star-hp-l wrote:
> Hi all,
>
> Here are the slides with all the comments from the conveners over the
> last few days implemented.
>
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/Tanmay_Pani_QM2023.pdf
>
> The preliminary page:
>
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/blog/tpani/Preliminary-request-Generalized-angularities
>
> Thanks,
>
> Tanmay
>
> On Wed, Aug 30, 2023 at 2:58 PM Yi Yang <yiyang0429 AT gmail.com>
> wrote:
>
> > Hi Tanmay,
> >
> > Thanks a lot for the draft. As we discussed during lunchtime today,
> > I will wait for your updated results and slides.
> >
> > Cheers,
> > Yi
> >
> > On Wed, Aug 30, 2023 at 6:10 AM Tanmay Pani via Star-hp-l
> > <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
> >
> > Hi all,
> >
> > I have updated the link with the first draft of the talk. Please
> > find them here:
> >
> > Tanmay_Pani_QM2023.pdf [1]
> >
> > Looking forward to comments and suggestions
> >
> > Tanmay
> >
> > On Tue, Aug 29, 2023 at 1:34 AM Tanmay Pani
> > <tanmay.pani.rutgers AT gmail.com> wrote:
> >
> > Hi all,
> >
> > This submission is a draft version, please just use this version to
> > peruse the plots. I will be updating this shortly into a more final
> > version
> >
> > Thanks,
> >
> > Tanmay
> >
> > On Tue, Aug 29, 2023 at 2:31 AM webmaster--- via Star-hp-l
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