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["Mooney, Isaac" <isaac.mooney AT yale.edu>]

Hi Priyanka,

Hope you had safe travels home. Sorry for my delay — see below for my comments. With these implemented, I sign off.

Thanks,

Isaac

15. It's not clear to a non-expert whether you mean that it's the first measurement of femtoscopic correlations between these pairs, full stop; or you mean first in this rapidity range, with this species, at this CM energy, with data from these years, at this experiment :). Anything that is just more detail on the measurement could be moved before this. E.g. "In this presentation, using data from 2014 and 2016 taken by the STAR experiment, we will show the first measurement..."

16. "D0 - proton" -> "D0 - p"

17. "in the years"

21. "in the 0-80% centrality range" or "in 0-80% centrality". Or, preferably, "centrality-inclusive femtoscopic correlation function...” instead. But up to you.

On Sep 12, 2023, at 5:18 AM, Roy Chowdhury Priyanka (DOKT) via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hi Nihar,

Thanks for all your comments and signing off. I have implemented all and updated version is here https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/DAE_abstract_V2_PRC.pdf

Regards,

Priyanka

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Hello Priyanka,

Please find my comments on your nice abstract.
With these implemented, I sign off.

L4: title
"…at STAR" -> "by STAR"

L5: "Priyanka Roy Chowdhury " -> "Priyanka Roy Chowdhury (for the STAR 
Collaboration)"
  Please mention your affiliation.
L7: "…and they…" -> "…and experience …"
L10: "as well as" -> and
L11:     between charmed mesons -> between the charmed meson
  L22:discuss physical implications. -> discuss their physical 
implications.


Cheers
Nihar


On 2023-09-11 16:54, Roy Chowdhury Priyanka (DOKT) via Star-hp-l wrote:
> Dear convenors,
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> I would like to draw your attention to my submitted abstract for the
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> 
> Thanks in advance.
> 
> Regards,
> Priyanka
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