STAR HardProbes PWG

["Mooney, Isaac" <isaac.mooney AT yale.edu>]

Hi Nihar,

Thanks for the quick turnaround on the weekend. I uploaded a new version to the node, and pushed it to STAR-talks since Yi is on holiday. See below for some responses.

Thanks again,

Isaac

On Feb 10, 2024, at 1:19 PM, Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hello Isaac,

As this presentation is the same as your DNP talk, I have following 
minor comments.
With these addressed, I sign off.


SLide8: Main subdetectors, as of mid-2010s -> It is not required. 
Because you mentioned O+O, Ru+Ru, etc , and they are after 2010 data 
taking. So it may create confusion.

>> I actually felt that it is less confusing to specify it given that I will talk about datasets where some of what I say on that slide no longer holds, but I’m not very attached to doing it that way, so I modified it as you suggested.

Slide11: Right detector figure, there is no ZDC and VPD detectors in the 
figure. But I can see only text with arrow. I think you can add some 
cartoons there to indicate these detectors.

>> The problem is just that the website where I got those images doesn’t have any for the VPD and ZDC, and assuming things are to-scale they’re not easy to fit in the same frame anyway when the barrel is the focus. I don’t know of very nice looking dedicated graphics for these two detectors, but the VPD is at least visible on s. 43/44, and I added a backup slide to show the location of the ZDC in case that comes up. 

Slide12: /w -> with
p- and np-QCD -> p-QCD and np-QCD
w/r/t -> ?

>> Done. (By the way, w/r/t means “with respect to”). 

Best
Nihar




On 2024-02-08 04:39, Mooney, Isaac via Star-hp-l wrote:

Hi all,

Sorry this is late — just a note that it’s effectively the same as my
DNP talk in December, with pointers added to Youqi’s and Sevil’s
talks. So hopefully it won’t need too many additional edits.

Thanks,
Isaac

On Feb 7, 2024, at 6:01 PM, webmaster--- via Star-hp-l 
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