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[Barbara Trzeciak <barbara.trzeciak AT gmail.com>]

Hi Jakub,

thanks for the update. I have only minor comments:

- L1: quarkonia -> quarkonia in vacuum

- L2: remove "describing it"

- L4: properties -> properties in heavy-ion collisions

- L6: the results -> results

- L8: and contains -> to reconstruct

- L9: 2 GeV/c -> 2 

Cheers,

Barbara

On Tue, Feb 27, 2024 at 9:57 AM Ceska, Jakub <jakub.ceska AT fjfi.cvut.cz> wrote:

Dear Barbara,

thank you very much for the important point. I have cut down the abstract to the character limit in v6. v5 before the cuts is still listed for comparison.

Best regards,
Jakub

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Od: Barbara Trzeciak <barbara.trzeciak AT gmail.com>
Odesláno: úterý 27. února 2024 9:47
Komu: STAR HardProbes PWG <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
Kopie: Mooney, Isaac <isaac.mooney AT yale.edu>; Ceska, Jakub <jakub.ceska AT fjfi.cvut.cz>; Yi Yang <yiyang0429 AT gmail.com>; webmaster AT star.bnl.gov <webmaster AT star.bnl.gov>
Předmět: Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Jakub Ceska for ICHEP 2024 submitted for review

 

Hi Jakub,

nice abstract. Please just make sure that it satisfies the 1000 character limit given by the conference.

Cheers,

Barbara

On Sun, Feb 25, 2024 at 4:11 PM Ceska, Jakub via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Dear Isaac,

thank you for the excellent suggestion, it has been changed in v5.

Best regards,
Jakub

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Od: Mooney, Isaac <isaac.mooney AT yale.edu>
Odesláno: neděle 25. února 2024 2:53
Komu: STAR HardProbes PWG <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
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Předmět: Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Jakub Ceska for ICHEP 2024 submitted for review

 

Hi Jakub,

Nice to see this abstract being submitted for ICHEP, which is a good fit for the analysis. I just have one small legibility suggestion for your consideration:

“…using data collected in 2017 by the STAR detector.”

Thanks,

Isaac

On Feb 23, 2024, at 5:08 AM, Ceska, Jakub via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Dear Yi and Nihar,

thank you for your comments. They have all been addressed in v4.

Best regards,
Jakub

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Od: Yi Yang <yiyang0429 AT gmail.com>
Odesláno: pátek 23. února 2024 4:04
Komu: STAR HardProbes PWG <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
Kopie: Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>; Ceska, Jakub <jakub.ceska AT fjfi.cvut.cz>; webmaster AT star.bnl.gov <webmaster AT star.bnl.gov>
Předmět: Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Jakub Ceska for ICHEP 2024 submitted for review

 

Dear Jakub,

Thanks a lot for the updated version. I don't have any further comments on it.

Cheers.

Yi

On Thu, Feb 22, 2024 at 9:41 PM Ceska, Jakub via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Dear Nihar,

I have tried to implement your comments. Please see v3, lines 8 and 9 and let me know, if this works for you, or if you have any further comments.

Best regards,
Jakub

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Od: Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>
Odesláno: čtvrtek 22. února 2024 13:57
Komu: Ceska, Jakub <jakub.ceska AT fjfi.cvut.cz>
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Předmět: Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Jakub Ceska for ICHEP 2024 submitted for review

 

Hello Jakub,

> As for the kinematic regions, do you mean that I should add the
> measured spectra of the Upsilons, or if I should specify the pT and
> eta ranges of the Upsilons we measure for the multiplicity dependence?

Please include pT and eta range of Upsilon and what channel you use for 
this measurement.

Thank you
Nihar



On 2024-02-22 18:10, Ceska, Jakub wrote:
> Dear Nihar,
> 
> thank you very much for your comments. I intend to submit  it as
> myself; this was an oversingt in my template.
> 
> As for the kinematic regions, do you mean that I should add the
> measured spectra of the Upsilons, or if I should specify the pT and
> eta ranges of the Upsilons we measure for the multiplicity dependence?
> 
> 
>  Best regards,
> Jakub
> 
> -------------------------
> 
> Od: Star-hp-l <star-hp-l-bounces AT lists.bnl.gov> za uživatele Nihar
> Sahoo via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
> Odesláno: čtvrtek 22. února 2024 13:21
> Komu: STAR HardProbes PWG <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
> Kopie: Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>; webmaster AT star.bnl.gov
> <webmaster AT star.bnl.gov>
> Předmět: Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Jakub Ceska for ICHEP
> 2024 submitted for review
> 
> Hello Jakub,
> 
> Thank you for your nice abstract.
> I have no major comments.
> 
> _ Not sure, if you want to submit this abstract with multiple authors
> or
> not;
> Please add "for the STAR Collaboration"
> _ Please include kinematic region like pT and eta of Upsilon.
> 
> Best
> Nihar
> 
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>> 
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