STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Priyanka,

Please find my comments on your nice proceedings.

L3: Priyanka Roy Chowdhury  -> Priyanka Roy Chowdhury (for the STAR 
Collaboration)
L4: insWarsaw -> "ins" is this a typo? If Yes, please correct it.
Summary. — Heavy… -> Abstract. Heavy… [no "—" in between; BTW, not sure 
if it is a Summary or Abstract for this type of proceedings, as I can't 
see summary/conclusion/outlook at the end.]

A study of  -> Study of
Here we show the first measurement -> We report the first measurement…
D0 − Kaon -> D0 − Kaon [make it roman, all places]
…STAR experiment along with a comparison of experimental result with 
available theoretical predictions in order to discuss physics 
implications.
->…STAR experiment. The physics implications are discussed by comparing 
theory calculation.

L7:	Relativistic collisions between heavy ions -> 	Relativistic heavy 
ion collisions ;
                quarks with higher mass, -> need to mention relative to what?
L10: hadronization, chemical freeze-out -> need to be careful using two 
together in the context of HF
L14: studying the formation and characteristics of the QGP -> studying 
the properties of QGP
L14-15:  …a deconfined state  of hadronic matter produced at 
sufficiently high energy densities. -> a deconfined state of quarks and 
gluons produced at sufficiently high energy density and temperature. 
[Here "deconfiment" refers to quark and gluons"]
L15:    Detection of QGP -> Study of QGP helps …
…the universe in the moments after the Big Bang -> the microsecond old 
universe just after the Big Bang

L17: 	…STAR successfully observed …hadrons including D0 (D ̄0). -> The 
STAR experiment observed nuclear modification factor and collectivity of 
open heavy flavor hadron corroborating the important QGP signature in 
Au+Au collisions at \sNN=200 GeV at RHIC. Or Similar.
L20-21: Please remove this sentence, not needed as you already mentioned 
in previous sentence.
L22: 		For further understanding of interaction behavior of heavy quarks 
(c,b) within medium, -> Please rephrase this
L23:            momentum correlation function  -> of what?
L24: constrain  different theoretical models. -> or constrain different 
model parameters. [We can constrain parameters, not theory mode] ;
It is possible to study the phase-space evolution of emission source… -> 
sounds awkward. Please rephrase it.
L26: 		quantum statistics …absent -> Is that true? And also rephrase 
this sentence.
L29-32: Please break this long sentence.
L35:  expressed as eq. 1: -> expressed as,
L40:            represented as eq. 2.  ->            represented as,
Eq. 2 "and " -> Make it roman
L42: from same event -> from the same event
L44: 		similar Z-position vertex (VZ)  -> similar primary vertex-z 
position
L48: that allows final statements to be made about the fundamental 
particles. -> remove this. Not needed
Time of flight  -> The time-of-flight
L49: 		for charge particle  identifications. -> for charged particle 
tracking and identification.
L51:  track particles containing containing charm and beauty quarks  -> 
track open heavy-flavor hadrons
L54: K and π tracks and -> K and π, tracks and
L55: This paper shows … -> In these proceedings, we report the first…
        D0/D ̄0-K+/−   -> Better to use              (D0+D ̄0)-(K^+ + K^-)

L56:            at center of mass energy, √sNN  ->           at  √sNN
L57:            of available statistics -> remove this

Page-3: "FEMTOSCOPIC CORRELATION STUDIES BETWEEN D0 MESONS AND CHARGED 
KAONS IN AU+AU COLLISIONS A…" -> why it is cut off, adjust the length by 
shortening the text here.

L60  applied. Primary -> …applied: Primary …
 |V_Transverse| -> |V_XY|
measured by two sides -> measured between two sides
L65:  the TPC; The K and pi
L66:	with criteria of deviation in resolution-normalised … -> Please 
rephrase
L73:    track pointing resolution -> track resolution
successful reconstruction of D  -> reconstructed D^0 and bar_D^0 
invariant mass using STAR data of Au+Au …
 L76:           increasing pT -> increasing transverse momentum, pT,

L77: …GeV/c were we observed good S/B ratio -> …GeV/c with good S/B 
ratio.
L78: "PurityD0 " -> "Purity" is sufficient. It is understood for D^0 
[same for 79]
L80: momentum integrated nσK fit using … -> Rephrase it
L81:	We consider kaons with momenta … 		and other hadrons . -> Please 
rephrase this sentence.
L82: "within considered momentum range. " -> Mention the momentum range 
here.
L83: transverse momentum, pT -> pT  [you arelary mentioned "transverse 
momentum, pT"]
L89: We considered and removed … -> Rephrase it; what do mean 
"considered and removed" ?
L92: …we encountered negligible number of merged tracks. -> we found a 
negligible contribution from merged tracks.

Eq.3 -> all texts, make those roman; like corr, measured.

L94-95: …pT integrated D0 signal purity and the average purity of kaon 
sample -> here "the average purity of kaon sample" is also pt 
integrated. If yes, please make it consistent.

L99: Inconisistent use of notation, like , here DK pairs, L96: D0 − K 
pair. Please make it consistent all places.
L100: and systematic uncertainty studies. -> remove this. Not needed.
L103: you need to mention what is "CD0K+ = CD+K0 " ?
L104: the Coulomb interaction.
L109: "We observe a clear depletion at origin due to the presence of D∗ 
(2317)± bound state which increases with decreasing source radius." -> 
This sentence is not corrected. "We observed…" sounds like in data which 
is not the case. That is in the model. So rephrase it.
Fig.2: See comment L99; 2 fm respectively. -> 2 fm, respectively.

L112: D0−hadron pairs i.e. -> D0−hadron (make it roman) pairs, i.e. …

L113: from Run 2014 and 2016 -> from the year 2014 and 2016.
L114: 		increase the precision of measurement of the correlation 
functions -> increase the precision of the measurement…

L115: More theoretical inputs are welcome that … -> Theoretical inputs 
are needed for better understanding of these data.

L121: remove "and STAR collaboration."; you are submitting proceedings 
on behalf of the STAR collaboration so it is not needed.


Best
Nihar

On 2024-03-13 20:36, webmaster--- via Star-hp-l wrote:
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>
> Priyanka Roy Chowdhury ( priyanka.roy_chowdhury.dokt AT pw.edu.pl ) has
> commented on a material originally submitted by Priyanka Roy Chowdhury 
> (
> priyanka.roy_chowdhury.dokt AT pw.edu.pl ) at
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/WPCF-2023/Femtoscopic-correlation-studies-between-D0-mesons-and-charged-kaons-AuAu-col
>
> Comment:
> Dear Convenors,
> Please provide me your opinions and suggestions by reviewing my 
> proceeding.
> Regards,
> Priyanka
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