STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Diptanil,

I have only a minor comment on your nice abstract. With this implemented 
I sign off.

L15: help us put significant constraints -> help us putting significant 
constraints

Best
Nihar

On 2024-05-14 03:31, Diptanil Roy via Star-hp-l wrote:
> Hi Isaac, thank you for your thorough comments on the abstract. An
> updated version is now available at
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/HP_2024_v3_Diptanil_1.pdf.
>
> Please find some inline comments below:
>
> > 11. "of different resolution parameters"? But I recommend removing
> > "of different resolutions" anyway.
>
> I want to keep this because the measurements at different jet cone
> sizes are new for Hard Probes.
>
> > 13. You do introduce a lot of observables here without definition
> > (nuclear modification factors, fragmentation function, generalized
> > angularities, radial profile, ...). I understand that space is
> > limited, you're synthesizing a lot of work, and Hard Probes is a
> > niche/expert audience, but wanted to point it out in case you can
> > think of a compact way to address this point. You might be able to
> > save space by changing the comment about the HFT to a more generic
> > "along with subsystem improvements to the STAR experiment," or
> > something like that; also the end of that sentence is a bit
> > redundant with the last sentence of the abstract and could be
> > combined somehow.
>
> I added formulae for the fragmentation function and angularities. I
> think that's the simplest way to add more information about the
> observables without going over the word limit. Let me know if you have
> any suggestions on if I can improve it.
>
> Cheers,
>
> On Mon, May 13, 2024 at 4:37 PM Mooney, Isaac
> <isaac.mooney AT yale.edu> wrote:
>
> > Hi Neil,
> >
> > Good job combining different analyses to make a coherent abstract. I
> > have a few small comments below.
> >
> > Thanks,
> > Isaac
> >
> > 3. Remove "medium"
> >
> > 4. This sentence is a bit of a run-on. Maybe: "...or through
> > medium-induced gluon bremsstrahlung, which is the dominant mode of
> > energy loss for gluons and light quarks. Theoretical calculations
> > predict that at low transverse momentum, this radiative energy loss
> > is suppressed for heavy quarks such as charm and bottom."
> >
> > 8. "low-p_{T} charm-tagged"
> >
> > 9. Remove "closer"
> >
> > 11. "of different resolution parameters"? But I recommend removing
> > "of different resolutions" anyway.
> >
> > 13. You do introduce a lot of observables here without definition
> > (nuclear modification factors, fragmentation function, generalized
> > angularities, radial profile, ...). I understand that space is
> > limited, you're synthesizing a lot of work, and Hard Probes is a
> > niche/expert audience, but wanted to point it out in case you can
> > think of a compact way to address this point. You might be able to
> > save space by changing the comment about the HFT to a more generic
> > "along with subsystem improvements to the STAR experiment," or
> > something like that; also the end of that sentence is a bit
> > redundant with the last sentence of the abstract and could be
> > combined somehow.
> >
> > On May 13, 2024, at 03:28, Yi Yang via Star-hp-l
> > <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
> >
> > Dear Neil,
> >
> > Thanks a lot for the updated version. It looks great to me. I don't
> > have any further comments on it.
> >
> > Cheers,
> > Yi
> >
> > On Sat, May 11, 2024 at 5:05 AM Diptanil Roy
> > <roydiptanil AT gmail.com> wrote:
> >
> > Hi Yi, thank you for your comments. I have now uploaded a v2 with
> > the suggested changes. Especially, the last paragraph has been
> > shortened a bit.
> >
> > Here's the link to v2:
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/HP_2024_v2_Diptanil.pdf
> > [1]
> >
> > Please let me know if you have any more comments.
> >
> > Thank you.
> >
> > On Wed, May 8, 2024 at 10:35 PM Yi Yang <yiyang0429 AT gmail.com>
> > wrote:
> >
> > Dear Neil,
> >
> > Thanks a lot for the nice abstract. I have some minor
> > comments/suggestions for your consideration.
> > - L1: heavy ion --> heavy-ion
> > - L11 - L15: it reads a bit long to me , I would merge them
> > together like: In this talk, we present several measurements of jet
> > related observables for D0(cu ̄) meson tagged jets in Au+Au
> > collisions at √sNN = 200 GeV collected by the STAR experiment,
> > including the yields and nuclear modification factors as functions
> > of pT,Jet, fragmentation function, and generalized angularities.
> > (probably not better than yours, so it is totally up to you.)
> >
> > Cheers,
> > Yi
> >
> > On Wed, May 8, 2024 at 12:16 AM Diptanil Roy via Star-hp-l
> > <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
> >
> > Dear conveners and HP-PWG,
> >
> > Please find my contribution for HP 2024 below. I plan on presenting
> > a summary of all charm tagged jets measurement (spectra,
> > angularities, jet cone size dependence etc) at STAR.
> >
> > Please let me know if you have any comments or questions.
> >
> > Thank you.
> >
> > On Tue, May 7, 2024 at 12:11 PM webmaster--- via Star-hp-l
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> > Dear Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
> >
> > Diptanil Roy (roydiptanil AT gmail.com) has submitted a material for a
> > review,
> > please have a look:
> > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/67700
> >
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