STAR HardProbes PWG

["Mooney, Isaac" <isaac.mooney AT yale.edu>]

Hi Wei and Yan,

I only have some small typographical comments on your nice abstract, below. I sign off and will push it to STAR-talks.

Thanks,

Isaac

9. "providing leverage" or "providing a lever"

10. "dissociate"

14. Upright "Ru" and "Zr" (also "AA" in "R_AA").

16. "production" -> "modification"

20. "central"

24. "also be"

On May 14, 2024, at 17:32, Yi Yang via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hi Wei an Yan,

Thanks a lot for the updated version. Just one additional suggestion for your consideration. 

 - Title: It would be good to add "at STAR" 

 (Probably it is good to spell out USTC and SCNU for your institutes, not everyone knows about these abbreviations.) 

Cheers,

Yi

On Tue, May 14, 2024 at 7:43 PM 张炜 <wzhang AT m.scnu.edu.cn> wrote:

Hi Yi，

Thank you very much for the nice comments, I have implemented them, please let me know if you have any futher comment.

 

Best,

Wei

 

 

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Date:  Mon, May 13, 2024 03:53 PM

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Subject:  Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Wei Zhang for HP2024 submitted for review

 

Dear Wei and Yan,

Thanks a lot for the nice abstract. I have some minor comments for your consideration. 

 - Please spell out your institutes. 

 - L5: an evidence --> an important evidence 

 - L22: please add the collision system here (Ru+Ru/Zr+Zr).

Cheers,

Yi

On Sun, May 12, 2024 at 10:39 AM webmaster--- via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

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