STAR HardProbes PWG

[jeongmyung <jeongmyung AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Dear Nihar,

Thank you for your wonderful feedback.
Most of your comments were applied to the new version, and it was 
uploaded on the drupal page (Jeongmyung_HP2024_abstract_V3). But there 
was a one point that I couldn’t accept.

> L15: "…are embedded into √sNN = 200 GeV Au+Au collisions background
> obtained from a thermal model." -> Not clear to me. You want to embed:
> I) PYTHIA in background generated from a thermal model, or II) PYTHIA
> in Minimum Bias AuAu collisions at √sNN = 200 GeV. Please make it
> clear.

I guess that it indicates option I), not option II) clearly. Our thermal 
model which simulates the background was mentioned obviously in L15 
(“background ‘obtained’ from a ‘thermal model’”), and I don’t think 
there’s nothing to do with the MB events in the sentence.

Thank you!
Jeongmyung

2024-05-14 19:21에 Nihar Sahoo이(가) 쓴 내용:
> Hello Jeongmyung,
>
> Please find my comments on your abstract.
> Looking forward to seeing your results from this interesting 
> measurement.
>
> L1: "Jet quenching serves as a crucial probe of the Quark-Gluon
> Plasma…" -> "Jet quenching phenomenon is a crucial signature of the
> Quark-Gluon Plasma…"  [Jet quenching is a phenomenon, not a probe]
>
> L6: "…semi-inclusive jet measurements …" -> it is not clear the
> proposed "semi-inclusive jet measurement" is based on any trigger
> particle/jet or not. If yes, please mention that you measure
> "semi-inclusive recoil jet" from what trigger.
>
> _You need to discuss about how you plan to select semi-inclusive jets
>
> L10: the correction of background effects. -> the correction of
> uncorrelation background effects.
>
> L15: "…are embedded into √sNN = 200 GeV Au+Au collisions background
> obtained from a thermal model." -> Not clear to me. You want to embed:
> I) PYTHIA in background generated from a thermal model, or II) PYTHIA
> in Minimum Bias AuAu collisions at √sNN = 200 GeV. Please make it
> clear.
>
> Best
> Nihar
>
>
>
>
>
>
> On 2024-05-13 10:12, jeongmyung via Star-hp-l wrote:
> > Dear HP-PWG,
> >
> > I accidentally created three entries for my abstract for HP-2024.
> > Please discard two other entries
> > (https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/67753,
> > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/67753).
> >
> > This is a poster abstract for Hard-Probes 2024. As I presented at the
> > last collaboration meeting in March, I intend to show some simulation
> > results regarding semi-inclusive jet mass measurement, including the
> > closure test. Your feedback will be highly appreciated.
> >
> > Thank you,
> > Jeongmyung
> >
> > 2024-05-13 10:11에 webmaster--- via Star-hp-l이(가) 쓴 내용:
> > > Dear Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
> > >
> > > Jeongmyung Kang (jeongmyung.kang AT gmail.com) has submitted a material 
> > > for a
> > > review, please have a look:
> > > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/67755
> > >
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