STAR HardProbes PWG

["Mooney, Isaac" <isaac.mooney AT yale.edu>]

Hi Brennan,

Sorry for my delay. The abstract looks good to me. A couple of small points below. With these addressed, I sign off.

Thanks,

Isaac

Title: “in p+p collisions at”

Add “for the STAR Collaboration” after your name.

It feels a bit weird to end the first paragraph with a reference to “this measurement” since you don’t introduce the measurement until the second paragraph. I’d suggest to move it to the end of the second paragraph as an outlook “This measurement along with related probes will provide guidance to improve model calculations of J/\psi production.” or similar.

On May 22, 2024, at 05:56, Brennan Schaefer via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hi Barbara,

Yes, I’ve uploaded a second version of the abstract.  Following the comments, instead of a revision, a near complete rewrite was necessary.

https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/HP2024_Abstract_BSchaefer_II.pdf

all the best,

b

On Wed, May 22, 2024 at 5:40 AM Barbara Trzeciak via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

H Brennan,

Any updates on your abstract ?

Cheers,

Barbara

On Tue, May 14, 2024 at 2:19 PM Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hello Brennan,

Thank you for your nice abstract.
A few comments can be found below.

1) it would be good to mention what kinematic range this measurement
will be reported. For instance, pT, eta, etc.
2) thereby increasing precision and extending the reach into higher
multiplicity. -> It would be better to mention, if possible, why it is
important to explore high multiplicity range?


Best
Nihar

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