STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Priyanka,

Please find a few comments on your nice slides from:
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/SQM24_Priyanka_V1.pdf

Slide7: you discuss about scattering length from ALICE measurement, do 
you have plan to calculate the same from STAR data? You need to link 
Slide7 message with your analysis too, if you want to motivate.

Slide15,16: STAR data shows -> STAR data show ;
emission source size of 5 fm or larger -> how do you know "larger" case?

Plots on Slide 15,16,17: you need to mention inside the plot "[x% of 
2014 data used]".
I recall you have not used full statistics. So better to mention in this 
preliminary results what is that "x"?

With these implemented, I sign off.

Thank you
Nihar


On 2024-05-27 16:36, Roy Chowdhury Priyanka (DOKT) via Star-hp-l wrote:
> Dear conveners,
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>  This is a gentle reminder for reviewing my slides. Please let me know
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>  Regards,
>  Priyanka
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> Priyanka Roy Chowdhury ( priyanka.roy_chowdhury.dokt AT pw.edu.pl ) has
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> Comment:
> Dear Conveners,
>
> The modified version (V1) content the final figures (2 of those are
> waiting
> for approval) along with some required changes. The older version (V0)
> is now
> deleted.
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> Priyanka
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