STAR HardProbes PWG

["Mooney, Isaac" <isaac.mooney AT yale.edu>]

Hi Ondrej,

The slides look very good and I sign off. I just have one small comment — on 
s. 9, it doesn’t come off very clearly what you mean with the arrows within 
the first bullet point. (These two statements are somewhat just rephrasings 
of parts of the first statement.) I know you’re following what is said in the 
paper but please take another look and see whether you can restructure this 
so the audience doesn’t get confused. The second bullet has also lost a bit 
of context from the paper which mentions the volume and energy deposition 
from a calculation.

Thanks,
Isaac

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