STAR HardProbes PWG

[Yi Yang <yiyang0429 AT gmail.com>]

 Dear Wei,

Thank you so much for the nice slides. I have some minor comments for your consideration. 

 - Title: It reads a bit strange. You can consider: Recent Quarkonia Results from STAR  

 - p3: Goes through --> Go through

 - p4: It would be great to put some physics meaning of RAA < 1 and RAA > 1  

 - p13: ... dependence at RHIC --> ... dependence observed at RHIC

 - p15: heavy ion --> heavy-ion 

 - p20: What do you mean "`smooth trend from isobar to Au+Au collisions"? 

 - p23: Title, you need to emphasize this is the comparison between isobar and pp. 

 - p25: First bullet: probably have an extra space in front of "in central"

Cheers,

Yi

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