STAR HardProbes PWG

[Yi Yang <yiyang0429 AT gmail.com>]

Hi Andrew,

Thanks a lot for the nice slides. I have some minor comments for your consideration. 

 - p4: I still think there should be a way to determine the turnover point, you probably can use the similar method from AMS to do it (Figure 4, https://ams02.space/physics/towards-understanding-origin-cosmic-ray-positrons) 

 - p5: STAR Result --> STAR result 

 - p5: this plot is a bit busy, and it's not easy to see the STAR points. Is it possible to make the STAR points in red? 

 - p7: By just reading the slides, it seems a bit strange to have this rc here, but probably you can make a nice transition. Please add the definition of rc in this slide. 

Cheers,

Yi

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