STAR HardProbes PWG

[Yi Yang <yiyang0429 AT gmail.com>]

Hi Andrew,

Thanks a lot for the nice abstract. I only have some very minor comments on it.

 - Title: I would think "at STAR" should be at the end, like "Exploiting Two- and Three-point Charge-Energy Correlators as Probes of Jet Evolution at STAR", but it is up to you. 

 - Remove "(QCD)" 

 - by a detector experiment --> by an experiment (up to you) 

 

Cheers,

Yi

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