STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Andrew,

Your presentation slides look good to me. I have some comments below.
With these implemented I sign off.

SLide5: Quark, gluon fragmentation differences transition shift -> Could 
you please elaborate? is this different from hadron-pardon transition?

SLide12: left top (small) text equation -> it would be good to make it 
clear and large; and also please write down full expression.


Best
Nihar


On 2024-06-30 02:06, Yi Yang via Star-hp-l wrote:
> Hi Andrew,
>
> Thanks a lot for the nice slides. I have some minor comments for your
> consideration.
>  - p4: I still think there should be a way to determine the turnover
> point, you probably can use the similar method from AMS to do it
> (Figure 4,
> https://ams02.space/physics/towards-understanding-origin-cosmic-ray-positrons
> [1])
>  - p5: STAR Result --> STAR result
>  - p5: this plot is a bit busy, and it's not easy to see the STAR
> points. Is it possible to make the STAR points in red?
>  - p7: By just reading the slides, it seems a bit strange to have this
> rc here, but probably you can make a nice transition. Please add the
> definition of rc in this slide.
>
> Cheers,
> Yi
>
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