STAR HardProbes PWG

[Barbara Trzeciak <barbara.trzeciak AT gmail.com>]

Hi Andrew,

Nice abstract. I sign of with the following comments:

Monte-Carlo -> Monte-Carlo simulations

pp data -> pp collision data

Cheers,

Barbara

On Mon, Jul 1, 2024 at 5:59 PM Andrew Tamis via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hello Yi,

Thank you very much for the comments, I have implemented them and uploaded a new version.

Best,
Andrew

On Sat, Jun 29, 2024 at 4:47 PM Yi Yang via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hi Andrew,

Thanks a lot for the nice abstract. I only have some very minor comments on it.

 - Title: I would think "at STAR" should be at the end, like "Exploiting Two- and Three-point Charge-Energy Correlators as Probes of Jet Evolution at STAR", but it is up to you. 

 - Remove "(QCD)" 

 - by a detector experiment --> by an experiment (up to you) 

 

Cheers,

Yi

On Fri, Jun 28, 2024 at 2:16 AM webmaster--- via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

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Andrew Tamis (andrew.tamis AT yale.edu) has submitted a material for a review, 
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