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[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Priyanka,

Please find my minor comments on your nice abstract.
With these implemented I sign off.

L2: Au+Au collision -> Au+Au collisions
L18; and physics implications -> and its physics implications...

Best
Nihar


On 2024-09-04 15:04, "Roy Chowdhury Priyanka (DOKT)" wrote:
> Hi Yi,
>
>  Thanks for your nice comments. Please find the modified version here.
>
>
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/WPCF24_abstract_Priyanka_V1_modified.pdf
>
>
>  Regards,
>  Priyanka
>
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> Hi Priyanka,
>
> Thanks a lot for the well-written abstract. I only have some minor
> comments on it.
>  - Title: I would suggest to add collision energy, but it is up to
> you.
>  - L12: did --> performed
>  - L14: K− − π+ (and its charge conjugate)   --> K^{-/+} -
> π^{+/-}
>
> Cheers,
> Yi
>
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